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thank you there I appreciate it

bro can you tell me how did I improve

really loved the story and[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

bro have you started reading this

good writing but there's a scope for improvement and I was feeling bad when there is only cricket in the novel then I read the new chapter and I was so excited to see how the mc kicks their asses I didn't expect this.