rough writing, there are no misspellings, but he doesn't separate talking of different characters. So the readers don't know where the talking ends and the thinking begins. Need to put space between paragraphs and personaly I would prefer if you put the dialogue of different characters in different paragraphs. cool idea just needs improvement in writing quality
thanks for the chapter
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Tony Stark: "Anyway, I'm not giving up. It's just unfortunate the disc is on another planet. Such a hassle."
Marvel: I Started by Containing SCPs
Anime & Comics · Zaelum
she*
On the other hand, Kanae was furious. He didn't expect the young man to be a pervert. 'What kind of person is he? Flirting with me while fighting the Upper Moon 2!'
I Can Transmigrate into the World of Anime
Anime & Comics · FanficMortal
sorry for the rant 😅
I know it's because of plot, but I hate when the lovers go behind the mc back and reveal all their weaknesses and secrets to someone without permission. I mean, she straight up snitched and is telling them how to kill him and how they can exploit him.
A/N: Hey everyone, I'm still alive, but unfortunately my chicks are no longer with us. Yeah, I recently moved back to my family's abandoned farm. I bought a bunch of chicks, but things didn't go quite as planned. A mix of bad weather, power cuts, and a vicious cat took them out.
Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
Book&Literature · DreamyApe
I think it's miles 🤓
"Well, I guess I should be heading to school now, can't wait to meet new people and make new friends." I said as I had a full born smile as I was thinking about meeting new people in college. With my new and enhanced motorcycle engine revving at high idle, I started driving towards my new school with my heart going at a rapid pace as I drove at 600 m/h. As I was nearing the University, I slowed down to normal speed limits, pulling into the college parking lot on my motorcycle and reading all the signs I passed. As I passed a few buildings and made my way to an open parking space, I caught site of a small figure and a few people's attention as I parked. Getting off my bike and securing it's safety, I entered the registration building. Heading towards the main office to get my registered class schedule and a campus map for said classes. What a big school if I do say so, I sought the attention of every person I passed, especially because I was so attractive, it caught everyone's attention, especially the girls walking around campus. Heading back to the parking lot where my bike was parked, I saw an old 1968 Ford truck single cab 4x4. I inspected the truck from the outside as if it was mine, admiring it for a while.
Crossing The Twilight the Awakening
Movies · Roberto_0461
Kara cocked her head slightly, "Yes, he just slipped into the vents and crawled away. Why does Batman use the vents in his own space station? Or partially his, at least."
Gotham's Dead End Bar
Anime & Comics · Daddy
not yuei it's UA
I've been lucky enough not to go to school in this life. At first my agent didn't really care whether I study there or not, but after a couple of years, she persistently tried to force me to go to school, after many arguments I won of course, but I rejoiced at the victory not for long and after a week, every day I started to be visited by tutors. Although there is an upside to all this - it's still ten months before I enter Yuei, and I'm already fully prepared for the exams. So, following my morning tradition, I decided to browse the news feed, but today for a different purpose, and for now I should tell you about the small changes that had occurred during the years of radio silence.
MHA: Second chance
Anime & Comics · FanFictionPremium