theviplegendary

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2023-04-17 Joint Global
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theviplegendary
6 months ago
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the story and the plot is very good , but the whole tour music arc is kinda mid , it not really bad but i feel like those song lyrics is there to fill word and make chapter a bit longer , idk really try tone it down a little bit but the devoplement till this chapter from what i saw is very good for Jon ,that all and thanks for reading this long rant.

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theviplegendary
9 months ago
Commented

dude is wiping all the inheritors with infinity stone XD

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theviplegendary
9 months ago
Commented

the character is quite interesting, but unfortunately, I wouldn't say I like shy male MC a lot, so yea I hope there will be character development for him so that he can be a little confident and if his shy characteristics still appear till the end of the story then I just gonna drop the story, but hey this story is really good and easy to read, until then bye.

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theviplegendary
9 months ago
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ok why chapter 1is label as chapter 368 and where the rest of them?

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theviplegendary
9 months ago
Commented

what novel is this about quite complicated and also a bit intriguing.

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theviplegendary
11 months ago
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i don't comment alot but when the relationship of shirashi and ruri go into further beyond , I felt kinda relive and love theinteraction between them.

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theviplegendary
1 years ago
Commented

why did author delete some chapter XD

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theviplegendary
1 years ago
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yo

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theviplegendary
1 years ago
Posted

This is my first-ever review, and I must say the story is quite good not like super or high-level kinda that but very entertaining and fun to read type, so yea that is my take, and thanks to the author for creating this amazing story.

theviplegendary
theviplegendary
1 years ago
Commented

this is like Gyro situation at the end of JOJO part 7

If you're wondering, he'll kill me if I say his last name."

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