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No harem
Eve did it good enough to stop his skill from engaging
Bob summoned another [Light Bomb] and hurled it at her, and as she closed her eyes again, he reached out his hand, as the message for devolution appeared. Suddenly, his breath ceased again as his mind shook, and he lost sense of what he was about to do, his eyes wide open.
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Because his mind was disturbed
Bob summoned another [Light Bomb] and hurled it at her, and as she closed her eyes again, he reached out his hand, as the message for devolution appeared. Suddenly, his breath ceased again as his mind shook, and he lost sense of what he was about to do, his eyes wide open.
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He clenched his fists tight, his brows furrowing as Bob continued his thoughts, ignoring Freya as she tried her best to talk him out of this, 'To become strongest, one needed to draw the line between proactivity and reactivity. What decision would I take to keep things interesting?'
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explained in later chapters.
Its paws slapped into her back, and Bob dashed away, watching as she staggered forward, blood vomited from her mouth. She spun around and swung her blade, creating a vicious arc of light as her blade cut the wolf's paws clean off, spilling its blood all over the place.
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rage bait?
Bob stared her up and down, 'Does she really believe that he was going to let her walk out that door like this? In what world is that supposed to make any sense? As a gamer — if allowed — then farming NPCs for XP is very acceptable!'
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Maids VS Apocalypse
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original Failed Lord: My SSS-Ranked Skill Can Evolve Broken Talents!
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After his village was destroyed by an E-Ranked demon horde, Augustus was titled the failed lord and mocked by other noble lords. Until, he died. Augustus regressed with the knowledge of the future and his SSS-Ranked skill “Talent Evolution,” fighting to change the D-Ranked village of Iona into an S-Ranked Empire. Need resources? His villager's 10x Resource Multiplier Talent was evolved into 100x! Enemies coming? His champion's Two-Hit Critical Attack was evolved into a One-Hit Critical Attack! Gods? He reared a couple in his courtyard. While other lords slept on their villagers’ talents, Augustus’s villagers transcended gods. While they mocked him for picking a dead village, he would transform it into an oasis. — What to Expect: OP MC FROM THE START NO NTR/YURI/INCEST NOT FAST-PACED MORALLY WEAK MC What NOT to Expect: Caricature MC/Characters Pokemon Harem Forced Romance MC is touchy with killing Kind, Loving, and Clueless MC — Power Stone Goals: 200 PS: Weekly 1 Bonus Chapters (on Sundays)30 Chs 365 Collections
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"Impossible! Did he evolve that pathetic Lv1 Wolf in a Lv100 Demon Lord?" "Forget that little puppy dearest immortal, look at this SSS-ranked sword that has been lost since the Edo Tensei Harem era!" — After dying on his way to work one Monday morning, Bob reincarnated in Retribution Online — a roguelike where he would never die, coming back stronger after death. After skipping the great tutorial, and dying in his first run, he unlocked two overpowered developer haxs! Facing a powerful foe? Underlevel them. Need a powerful ally? Overlevel them! Wait a second. There is this legendary supreme ultimate godly immoral staff hidden in the lair of the most feared Moon Divine Emperor? I'll have my army of Lv100 mobs deal with that issue. Witness his meteoric rise to the top! His goal to become the greatest gaming legend to have ever lived— after he escaped this labyrinth of eldritch abominations. —— What to expect: OP MC with OP ARMY! NO NTR/YURI/INCEST NOT FAST-PACED MC IS NOT HIDING STRENGTH VILLAIN/MORALLY WEAK MC Do not expect: Caricature Characters Pokemon Harem Forced Romance MC is touchy with killing Kind, Loving, and Clueless MC -- Patreon Support: https://www.patreon.com/maxholmes460 Power Stone Goals: 200 PS: Weekly 1 Bonus Chapters (on Sundays) Golden Ticket Goals: 80 GT: Weekly 2 Bonus Chapters (on Sundays) Magic Castle or Higher Super Gift: up to 5 Bonus Chapters (in 3 Days)98 Chs 1.9k Collections
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Gaming For A Thousand Years To Unlock The Cosmology
“I will enslave all the gods.” — After spending his curse of immortality from a goddess on a thousand years in seclusion gaming away the mundane disturbances of the universe, Requiem the sheepherder of gods, finally unlocked the ultimate of countless realities — ⦗Cosmology⦘! He could finally rest in peace, happy. But— The gods and goddesses, creatures who were nothing more flock to him, gathered together and tried to usurp his supremacy! He, the one who shepherded the worlds for a thousand years would be bested by those worthless divinities? Heh — A pet dream… He commanded them to slaughter themselves, and unsealed the power of ⦗Cosmology⦘. All the vain gods were slaughtered, Armageddon would consume the old world and birth a new one, while he had heaven all to his lonesome. Finally, he would rest! His newfound power had other plans. ⦗Cosmic Eternity: You will be Reborn⦘ ⦗Memories Deleted⦘ … Fools. He would only rise again from the ashes, even stronger than before! No matter what they concoct in their hearts, he would destroy them again and again. After all, he Requiem was— ⦗Enslaved Gods, +1⦘ —The sheepherder of divinities.32 Chs 39 Collections
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“Wretched abomination of darkness! For going against the will of heaven, the Hero Association shall chase your aberrant self until your death!” He scoffed. "Who is going to hunt me down? Your dead gods or your pathetic selves?" —— By stumbling upon the forbidden realms and his learning of secrets he wasn't meant to know, his mortality was robbed off him and he was cursed with what mortals would regard as “Eternal Life”. He could no longer age, or be killed by mortals. With his power, Mylos swore to tear down the heavens as he built up his Hell from the ashes of the angles. His heart burnes with a frenzied flames as he swore to wipe the walls of his castle with the blood of the enemies. “Divine Tribulations?” Conquered. “Heavenly Retribution?” Defied. —— “Worthless aberration of chaos! Your life must end here, and your blood would be used to wash the cornerstones of this mountain! Now, lie and accept your fate!" They were terrified, quaking in their boots in fear as he stared upon them. He was a monster, some abominable creature that crawled it's way out of the pit of hell. Undying, unrelenting — The god-like monster grinned in the face of their heaviest weapons. It's eyes gleamed at the sight of their heavily armed Heroes and Legends. He was what they believed to be “The Devil”.0 Chs 89 Collections
You put a lot of thought into this review, and I appreciate it. So, let me clarify some things if you decide to keep reading. This is my first time writing a mastermind MC, so yes, things are very complex .The book is slow paced, so no info dumps and lengthy character descriptions barely ten chapters into the story. Everything in the summary has happened in the book but, you've not gotten to those parts. Everything confusing has been clarified by the MC in future chapters. Thanks for the review, it shows me how to improve my work.
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