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Commented The storyline is interesting but your writing skill still needs a lot of work.
ch 0 4 chapter 4
legendary sword emperor
Fantasy · patricklad
1yr
Commented I'm impressed the number of mistakes have reduced but I still found one or two that were wrong.
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1yr
Commented 5he story line is good but I'm starting to notice more spelling errors.
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1yr
Commented why did claven call him Jack while his name is Jake?
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1yr
Commented based on what I've read this novel is going to turn out great.
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1yr
Commented I'm already loving this novel,the descriptions are nice,I found only one error. keep up the good work
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The storyline and development are good and the world background too is good and I think this story is going to turn out to be great but the major problem is the update rate
legendary sword emperor
Fantasy · patricklad