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2 months ago

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Fantasy · The_Broken_Author

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3 months ago

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Legendary sword Emperor

Fantasy · The_Broken_Author

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3 months ago

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Legendary sword Emperor

Fantasy · The_Broken_Author

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3 months ago

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I think that the story development is very good, and also, the character design, keep up the good work

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11 months ago

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The storyline and development are good and the world background too is good and I think this story is going to turn out to be great but the major problem is the update rate

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11 months ago

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The storyline is interesting but your writing skill still needs a lot of work.

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1 years ago

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I'm impressed the number of mistakes have reduced but I still found one or two that were wrong.

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1 years ago

Commented

5he story line is good but I'm starting to notice more spelling errors.

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1 years ago

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why did claven call him Jack while his name is Jake?

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1 years ago

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based on what I've read this novel is going to turn out great.

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