Brother this upload speed is killing meeeeeee please go back to a chapter every 3 days. I'm fine with a slight reduction in quality or the presence of errors you're too much of a perfectionist my guy, it was great then and I'm sure it could continue to be.
See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
Goodness what a twist, this is what peak fiction looks like. Poor Isabella though 😥. I feel bad for Pamela too, used as a sow to produce fresh meatbags to inhabit for Albris. Wonder what will happen with her and how she'll feel. If I were you author, I think it's worth adding how she reacts to everything and what steps she takes next. She COULD be just a side character if you want, but I think it would be cool to have her persist in rebuilding house Evretis, possibly with Miwen's help.
You've written Isabella well, it genuinely makes me sad to hear that things are gonna get worse for her. I trust it will be good for the story over all, but it's still sad 😥
Strength
And without me, ideas, and the future, could all be for naught, for with me, a ruler shall find what is sought. What am I?"
Talent Awakening: Draconic Overlord Of The Apocalypse
Fantasy · Zurbluris
Where is next chapterrrrrrrrr
I don't think you ever posted a picture of Marin though...
Story has potential, keep it up!
oof still didn't post, the author's comment is the same as before for me no matter how much I refresh.
you mean chapter 81?
Chapter 81 Advancing To Rank 1
Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World
Games · _Drakon