Alejandr0

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2023-03-11 Joint Argentina
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Alejandr0
Alejandr0
4 months ago
Posted

Writing quality: 4.5 stars many songs and among them are the MC's thoughts so they force you to read the lyrics of the song, excellent spelling for me. Update stability: 5 stars Story Development: 3.5 is a slow story and there is no set goal or objective that the MC wants to achieve, except for the vulturis to accept his and his partner Rosalie's transformation into a vampire to avoid what happened to Edward and Bella in the original. World Background: 3 stars is twilight and there is not much development or expansion of said world. Character design: 2 stars. An adult woman transmigrated into the body of a child, a hypocritical MC who complains that Edwar is an invasive mind reader and emotionally and mentally manipulates the Cullens to further her own interests, without any mental development because if something bad happens to the MC begins to blame ROB and the world without accepting that her passive attitude is what causes her pain. In the end, her previous life only serves to define that she likes women, nothing more and nothing less. Another thing to mention is that Rosalie, her romantic interest, is unfaithful and marries a man when she and the MC confirm their relationship and there is no excuse that can change this fact no matter what develops there in the future. I'm on chapter 48.

Alejandr0
Alejandr0
5 months ago
Replied to EmphieIsMe

That's it, thanks for passing the link, I recommend that you put the link in the synopsis or always at the end of the chapter or in the author's notes

Alejandr0
Alejandr0
5 months ago
Replied to EmphieIsMe

What you posted was removed

Alejandr0
Alejandr0
5 months ago
Replied to Quen_Dolayne

I also hope that Robin has a new relationship and forgets about Rosalie, it's a shame that it can't be possible because of the chapter that shows the future and I also find all this quite pointless, it would make more sense if he left Rosalie with her original destiny and alone They were friends at the time. Now they were a couple and this whole situation generated infidelity and betrayal in their relationship. The best thing about this author is that he made many of us readers love Robin.

Alejandr0
Alejandr0
5 months ago
Replied to EmphieIsMe

I forgot to ask you what the discord is, the previous one is a dead link, send us the new one.

Alejandr0
Alejandr0
5 months ago
Replied to EmphieIsMe

I don't trust your words, this is the third time Robin has suffered, you're not fooling me.😛

Alejandr0
Alejandr0
5 months ago
Replied to EmphieIsMe

Nooooo Alice, the best girl, I liked her character in the novel. What a pity he is left with the unpleasant Rosalie. I just hope Robin never trusts Rosalie again.

Alejandr0
Alejandr0
5 months ago
Replied to EmphieIsMe

And Alice wasn't Robin's girlfriend just like Rosalie? or am I the confused one?

Alejandr0
Alejandr0
5 months ago
Replied to EmphieIsMe

I wanted to say how long until Alice and Robin meet.

Alejandr0
Alejandr0
5 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Now I'm going to let 10 or 20 chapters build up so I can read the whole thing about how Robin overcame the pain and all that. What I do know now is that Rosalie became the most unpleasant character for me. The trust is already completely broken and you know the saying, he who does it once will do it again. When are we going to see Alice get together with Robin?