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2023-03-06 Joint Colombia
That monster had a robust body covered in short, rough dark gray fur with black spots on its head. It seemed to have three legs similar to wolves, but the fourth leg at the front was like a monkey's, but with sharp claws like its other legs. Its head was hyena-shaped, with a wide mouth full of sharp teeth.
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I'm sorry, the automatic translator changed parts of the text to my original language.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
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Halberd
Zerlar handed Father the halberd wrapped in cloth. With deliberate movements, Father began to unwrap the cloth, revealing a weapon that took my breath away. The halberd had a majestic appearance, it was of an intense black color, except for the top where the spear point and the larger blade were, which had a reddish hue.
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I had forgotten to include the image in the previous chapter.
[Image of the halberd]
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The move that Eevee used was Flail, which is a move that becomes stronger the less health the Pokémon has.
And when she was close enough to Eevee, she used <drain punch> and Eevee staggered before counterattacking using its tail. When my sister's fist and Eevee's tail collided, both were propelled several meters away and their bodies tumbled on the ground several times before coming to a stop.
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Yes 50%
The place fell completely silent for several seconds and we were all watching to see if any of them would get up. To my good fortune, my sister ended up getting up, only she was covered in bruises.
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The move that Eevee used was Flail, which is a move that becomes stronger the less health the Pokémon has.
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because she crashed several times into the ground due to Eevee's attack
The place fell completely silent for several seconds and we were all watching to see if any of them would get up. To my good fortune, my sister ended up getting up, only she was covered in bruises.
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I ignored that thought because I'm not interested in meddling in other people's lives, and I don't like gossiping either. So I focused on Reinor, who used a Poké Ball and the Pokémon that appeared was an Eevee.
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Eevee
I ignored that thought because I'm not interested in meddling in other people's lives, and I don't like gossiping either. So I focused on Reinor, who used a Poké Ball and the Pokémon that appeared was an Eevee.
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Swift
When the presenter gave the signal to start, Reinor's Eevee jumped several meters and then swung its tail, which had started to glow before launching star-shaped projectiles towards my sister.
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Buneary's thought: Who do you think you are to say that I need luck to defeat you? I'll make you eat your own words.
"You don't have to invent a name to avoid telling me what your name is, sweetheart. Still, I wish you good luck because you'll need it if you want to beat me." I felt quite upset by what he said to the point of wanting to jump on him and use all the biting moves I learned to tear his neck apart. But I calmed down when I saw how my sister seemed quite angry at what he said, and that made me very happy because it shows that she appreciates me.
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Wooloo
My opponent took out a Poké Ball from which came a sheep with black wool on its face and legs, and the rest of its body was covered in white wool.
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Yungoos
The same trainer put Aipom away before bringing out another Pokémon whose name I couldn't remember, but it looked like an otter (Yungoos), which exchanged moves with Minccino.
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50/50
ch 0 3 Chapter 3
Soul Land: My Martial Soul is a Poke Ball
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