Moist_BedBugs

Moist_BedBugs

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Moist_BedBugs
Moist_BedBugs
1 months ago
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I'm definitely a totally original author and not copying SuperNerd's review format. Writing Quality 4/5 : Compared to the other RI fanfics I feel that it's decently well written. I could definitely improve on the first person chapters and make a happy one for once but I probably won't. i.e. every first person chapter is gonna be a tragedy. Update Stability 4/5: I upload frequently unless it's exam season but I don't upload daily or anything like White Shadow. Character Design 5/5: I design my characters decently well, I think. I haven't shown it off much as I write this review but I hope I can in the future. World Background 5/5: It's RI man, what do you expect? Story Development 3.75-4/5: Yeah, this is the aspect I need to improve. Like, I've got some REALLY cool stuff planned out but it's a bit difficult in terms of execution.

Moist_BedBugs
Moist_BedBugs
1 months ago
Replied to Romance_guy

Nope. Just overwhelmed with emotions after he escaped slavery and all. He'll calm down in a while, his personality will still remain the same.

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Moist_BedBugs
2 months ago
Replied to Vhaeron

Naturally there will be new wind path gu but variant humans, I'm not sure. i would need to make a legends of Ren Zhu chapter about them to add them to the story

In honour of the crazy amount of powerstones I got in the first chapter, Ask me absolutely any question about the plot, characters or anything else and I'll try to answer without giving spoilers.

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Moist_BedBugs
Moist_BedBugs
2 months ago
Replied to Ruckducker

He will likely stick with wind path till the end of the story. Although, I might go back on it if I decide something else.

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Moist_BedBugs
2 months ago
Replied to _Rex

This fanfic is the "original version", my rewrite of this fanfic would be mentioned in the "updates" channel of the discord server, and it's pinned in the channel under the name of my fic

Moist_BedBugs
Moist_BedBugs
3 months ago
Replied to FLACKO

Hey! I needed to write this chapter to prepare for another important Legend Of Ren Zhu episode!

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Moist_BedBugs
3 months ago
Replied to Ruckducker

you're not supposed to rn. I'll add more and more to let the viewers piece it together throughout the course of the story.

Moist_BedBugs
Moist_BedBugs
3 months ago
Replied to Romance_guy

Well, I haven't completely planned it out yet, but I do plan for him to be a more selfish person towards the end of the story

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Moist_BedBugs
4 months ago
Replied to Sweatysausage

Well, there will be something like that later on in the story. I'll give a small spoiler. Tai Qing is not what he seems to be 👍

Moist_BedBugs
Moist_BedBugs
4 months ago
Replied to jonknowsnothing

As mentioned before, the poison doesn't have much of an effect on gu masters. It just slows down their movements and they plan to sleep after too.

"Eat it. Obviously." Wei Huan spoke in a matter-of-fact manner,

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