I would agree but this is just who the author writes, which is kind of annoying to be honest. Moving on.
Permanently.
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
This whole scene and everything around it is bad. Like the rest of the dialogue in the story isn't that great, but this whole thing just feels like it shouldn't be here and somewhere else...
"But it is." Victor said. "And once more I am truly truly sorry. I tried to stop Reed. I tried to save him. But I just wasn't able to and for that you have my deepest apologies." He spoke.
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
I swear this shit hurts to read.
"Surprise. I am an excellent kisser." I said.
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
I think this is a step up in writing from my other story. My writing has improved by a good bit and I think the over all quality is just better. That said, there are still flaws and I have a long way to go as a writer. But I hope that who ever reads my story will be happy with it and enjoy it.
It's called bad writing and forced plot.
"Hahaha! Sneaky monkey! What do you think you're doing?" The seahorse alien landed next to Kalan and slapped the senzu bean out of his hand. He quickly grabbed it and ate it.
Others · Toga
Sigh.
"STOP! STOP!" Kalan shouted as the tears continued to fall. His body trembled, his tail jerked. His hands clenched tight into fists as his nails dug deep into his palms. Blood slowly dripped, but Kalan did not seem to have noticed it or felt any pain.
Others · Toga
Thank you and thanks for reading.
No clue.
Or he now has those Kakashi skills.
50: [Nimble Fingers]: Gives the user very dextrous fingers. Very useful for art, massages, and 'other' things.
Anime & Comics · Einlion
Sigh like I said, this whole things just feels so off. Like I get she wanted to tell him she now has a bun in the oven but Reed just died... Both of them should be devastated right now, not acting like its a normal day.
"Huh, what are you guys talking about?" Johnny asked. Walking up to Susan and I.
I Am Doom (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever