Pewpewcachoo

Pewpewcachoo

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I enjoy reading and writing. You can find me on here, RoyalRoad, Scribblehub and FanFiction under the same user name and picture. I also have a p@treon set up @ Pewpewcachoo go check it out.

2023-02-16 Joint United States
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Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
17 hours ago
Commented

Sigh like I said, this whole things just feels so off. Like I get she wanted to tell him she now has a bun in the oven but Reed just died... Both of them should be devastated right now, not acting like its a normal day.

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"Huh, what are you guys talking about?" Johnny asked. Walking up to Susan and I.

I Am Doom (Marvel)

I Am Doom (Marvel)

Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever

Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
17 hours ago
Replied to Drojam

I would agree but this is just who the author writes, which is kind of annoying to be honest. Moving on.

Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
17 hours ago
Commented

This whole scene and everything around it is bad. Like the rest of the dialogue in the story isn't that great, but this whole thing just feels like it shouldn't be here and somewhere else...

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"But it is." Victor said. "And once more I am truly truly sorry. I tried to stop Reed. I tried to save him. But I just wasn't able to and for that you have my deepest apologies." He spoke.

I Am Doom (Marvel)

I Am Doom (Marvel)

Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever

Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
1 days ago
Commented

I swear this shit hurts to read.

"Surprise. I am an excellent kisser." I said.

I Am Doom (Marvel)

I Am Doom (Marvel)

Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever

Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
2 days ago
Posted

I think this is a step up in writing from my other story. My writing has improved by a good bit and I think the over all quality is just better. That said, there are still flaws and I have a long way to go as a writer. But I hope that who ever reads my story will be happy with it and enjoy it.

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Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
2 days ago
Replied to AEON_

It's called bad writing and forced plot.

"Hahaha! Sneaky monkey! What do you think you're doing?" The seahorse alien landed next to Kalan and slapped the senzu bean out of his hand. He quickly grabbed it and ate it.

The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World

The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World

Others · Toga

Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
2 days ago
Commented

Sigh.

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"STOP! STOP!" Kalan shouted as the tears continued to fall. His body trembled, his tail jerked. His hands clenched tight into fists as his nails dug deep into his palms. Blood slowly dripped, but Kalan did not seem to have noticed it or felt any pain.

The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World

The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World

Others · Toga

Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
2 days ago
Replied to Ronaldo_Angeliski

Thank you and thanks for reading.

Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
Pewpewcachoo
3 days ago
Replied to F5S_GuardianElder

Or he now has those Kakashi skills.

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50: [Nimble Fingers]: Gives the user very dextrous fingers. Very useful for art, massages, and 'other' things.

BNHA: Singularity

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

  • Marvel-ous Ninjutsu original

    Marvel-ous Ninjutsu

    Anime & Comics ACTION REINCARNATION COMEDY SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED SLICEOFLIFE TRAGEDY GENIUS NARUTO MARVEL

    4.41 Récemment mis à jour

    I do not own anything from Marvel or Naruto. I just enjoy both universes. So content warning first, this is a fanfic of hot steaming garbage. I hope you enjoy it. I will most likely put in bad words, fights, gore and maybe some smut. Or maybe I won’t, we will see how this goes. This story is my attempt to write some fanfiction that I won’t hate, which is still up for debate. ------------------------------ Let us follow the MC as he is pushed into the world of Marvel with his own special super power made up from the world of Naruto. This will be close to the MCU, but let's call it Earth-199999-AU. AU is for the author's universe. MCU, check. X-Men, check. Doom and the fan-4? Double check. Other stuff from comics,  also check. From Naruto, eye powers? At some point, so check. Tailed beasts and summons? Nope. Chakra and ninja powers? Check and check. ------------------------------ At least one chapter will be posted weekly, possibly more if I write enough. This is posted on RoyalRoad, Scribble Hub, Fanfiction and now Webnovel. I also now have a p@treon set up under Pewpewcachoo go check it out if you want.

    148 Chs 13.2k Collections

  • The Will of D. reamers (A One Piece Fanfic) original

    The Will of D. reamers (A One Piece Fanfic)

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION COMEDY OVERPOWERED SLICEOFLIFE ONEPIECE

    Récemment mis à jour

    I don’t own anything from One Piece, I am just a fan who has followed the story for a long time… -------------------------------------------------- What happens when a person dies and loses part of his memories. Only to wake up one day in the world of One Piece? They do what any sane person would do… Train to become strong and set out on an adventure! What to expect from this story… Faster pacing than my other story… I hope. Trying to stay true to how fun One Piece is to read, while completely destroying the original story line. I hope you like where this story goes because I have a lot of ideas on where I want to take it. You will get one or more chapters a week, once I have set up a proper backlog of unedited chapters.

    36 Chs 569 Collections