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Amera_Mee
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This is getting interesting
ch 0 5 The Duke
Secrets Of Loretto Legacy
Fantasy · Moonflower414
Nop, he wasn't
Except for a group of people: Astin, Jacob, and Damion thought simultaneously.
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee
I see, dialogue sucks, you say? As for 2 chapters in 1, oh well, that happened cause I edited the first 10 chapters, and I added few additional details, but I couldn't add chapters in between so I have to resort to this method as simply merging them would have created a massive confusion.
ch 10 Ice cream
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee
He isnt blind, he just sees the world differently compared to others.
"Even though my level returned to back B-rank, my strength regressed considerably, and now I'm much weaker," Ryan contemplated as he skillfully dodged Josh's attacks, relying on his eyesight to predict where the attack was coming from.
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee
Aura,
Ryan's brain and body had received so much of a shock that he instinctively erased the source of the trauma.
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee
Demeaning
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Secrets Of Loretto Legacy
Fantasy · Moonflower414
Eyes 2 times.
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Fantasy · Moonflower414
Savouring her anxiety, he took hold of her arms, firmly, and removed her top.
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Fantasy · Moonflower414
emphasized isn't the right word. Try something more descriptive. also from, Luiza gave a cheeky litt... should be in a separate paragraph.
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Secrets Of Loretto Legacy
Fantasy · Moonflower414
Her eyes squinted into a crescent moon, slowing... also, better to break the paragraph into 2.
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Secrets Of Loretto Legacy
Fantasy · Moonflower414
Thanks Love!
ch 0 1 Her novel
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee
Thank You Love
ch 0 1 Her novel
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee
Aight, chapters was good, thank you for baring with my nitpicking and poor grammar, and all, a piece of advice tho, avoid using the same word twice in the same paragraph, if you can't think of anything , you can always look for synonyms in Google and such, imma write the rest later, as of now TcFT and good luck. You can ask the rest in discord.
ch 0 1 The End of a Life
Coming Down From Olympus
Fantasy · Tsukasa0
It's not BL.
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee