"Now say your pledge!"
Anime et Bandes dessinées · nkcthereaper
if they have a King named Alexander, they're surely prosperous.
"Prosperous, isn't it? You can already see that?" Chris, standing beside him, squinted at the horizon, where the island was still little more than a dot. "Man, your eyes are enviable."
Anime et Bandes dessinées · ZetharQuinn
And also some conversations are a bit unnatural for me, its as if most of the character's conversation to each other are a bit way too formal.
The story is good, with the MC being overpowered, although this one was an MTL, but I think this would be good showing the beginning of the MC's life, still good though. The part that was off with me was the end of most of the chapters, it always ends with "lets face this together" sorta vibe convo, which for me is a bit unnatural in a way, can't explain it, but if I have to see that line again and again it became weird on some sort. Anyways keep up the good work.
An interesting story. Keep up the good work Author🫡.
Is it just me or the Koraidon it fought possibly the one from the future on its own time, and now this Koraidon in the present will fight Cyclizar after evolving to Koraidon then Koraidon will go back to the past once again and the cycle repeats. Got trouble in explaining but yeah if you got the idea😆.
Ce livre a été supprimé.
Good chap, too much dog food for a single dog like me. Anyways keep up the good work, will be waiting for more🫡.
this is becoming like the blind hyuga fic
One of the things that I'm afraid of, it's when the author starts asking whether harem or not. We've come a long way my friend, why now?
Giving this a 5 since the story has the potential, the only downside for me would be the advantage, the MC's advantage was kinda lacking despite him getting transported to another world. Although this has a different approach, I think there still has to be some sort of advantage compared to the masses, in the story it's like the MC has been placed in a world where Pokémon started appearing, it was hinted in the beginning that he has a bit of knowledge with the Pokémon, should've not made the MC transported to the world instead, as we all know MC transported or whatsoever to another world has this sort of gold finger, not that I say he should have since there aren't some, but they still thrive in their stories with their own experience and advantages. Anyways it's still good. This was just me, my standards are kinda different since I've read countless stories like this so I have some sort of expectation.
Pokemon dungeon
Anime et Bandes dessinées · Best_Coach_9192