That is just sad. True but sad
Cara's internal monologue slowed. 'Of course I regret what happened to Amanda. That wasn't part of the plan. She was a terrible person, but she didn't deserve to die like that. She died with my kidney inside her, for crying out loud.'
Fantasy · fredrick_anele
Yes, it knows because it's in his head.
[That's not how skills function. They don't need a verbal command. They activate whenever you want or need them to.]
Fantasy · fredrick_anele
But you can't blame him. He loved her enough to give her his kidney, remember.
Cara's internal monologue slowed. 'Of course I regret what happened to Amanda. That wasn't part of the plan. She was a terrible person, but she didn't deserve to die like that. She died with my kidney inside her, for crying out loud.'
Fantasy · fredrick_anele
Just keep reading, and you will see.
Yes, only women. Though I have something planned for the MC in the second stretch of my book. you all are going to love it.
It will remain pure yuri for now. Things might change in the future.
I understand, though this is done to remind the readers that he still has a male consciousness in Cara’s body. But I will find another way to get the message across.
I must say I was skeptical about reading romance books, but this is well written, rarely any grammatical errors. And that crime element added in the later chapters has me hooked. For a first-time writer, you are quite good.
thanks for the support.
To clarify, he works at the morgue.
Cara tightened her grip, leaning close to Bernie's ear, her voice a low, menacing whisper. "So, what's it going to be, Bernie? Pay me now or watch your entire life burn to the ground. Your choice."
My Anti-hero Fairy System
Fantasy · fredrick_anele