well, personally I don't have any advice other than asking you to continue with the characters for a little longer, at least to create some bond with the character, well, other than that just keep up the good work which has been incredible, and please, don't be discouraged....
man, simply wonderful, that's all, you managed to completely capture the essence of an undead monster, the quality of the writing is also great, and in the weekly chapters that I'm following, the world building has been great, simply a work of art
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although it only has a few chapters, you can already see the great potential, personally I really like stories where the MC becomes a complete monster, and especially the undead part, I'm simply loving this part of the work, I wanted a lot more chapters like this great book
another human pretending to be a monster, seriously, he missed the chance to absorb and assimilate his fallen enemies, a way to easily acquire power, all because he wanted to stay close to his humanity, what's the point of that? He's not even human anymore
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despite being totally immersed in the book, I have a question, which I believe most readers must also have (or is it just me) which is about the MC system, for example, its statistics and things involving its character system, Could the author tell me if, at some point in the future, he intends to reveal it?
Pestilence: Rise Of The Pure Undead
Fantasy · Ready_