E_Dub1980

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looking for a good story to read.

2022-12-08 Joint Global
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E_Dub1980
1 months ago
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hope you rewrite this story but don't do the part with eragon doing his body modifications instead do a ritual with wild magic and the hidden dragon hearts to make him a elf. Then in the elf's city during the dragon celebration have him under go a second transformation to become a high-elf with increasing strength and magic power a foot long ears.

E_Dub1980
E_Dub1980
3 months ago
Commented

good story but why rubber for devil fruit why not the dark dark fruit that blackboard had instead for Luffy would make for a good story.

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