I don't like those childish over the top emotional tantrums from the mc so bland works fine for me.
Laughed for 15 minutes! Seriously?
The story is captivating and going great so far
Master Alom and Master Selmon...man I m ded🤣🤣
Ce livre a été supprimé.
When MC finally reached planet Wadala he found Cabba spanking 'em both sister's cheeks🤣
Nice work though
Your story is quite good I commend..But what is up with the cringe love story involving soo much one sided praising..I mean do you a want a lover or a fangirl.
No one to moan for him....hahahaha man I laughed so hard
Again a story by a 14 year old, portraying a jerk Goku clone🤦
Is this guy telling that freedom fighters are terrorists!!?...hahahaha my stomach hurts due to laughing...it would have been better if you stayed in your limits while spewing bullehit with that childish SCP geek brain of yours.