It’s alright. I do try to improve the grammar in my own novels. You can check my DxD fanfic for that. The current chapters don’t have any grammar errors, but the first few might, since they were written long ago and I never had time to re-edit them. The same goes for COTE (I am talking about the advanced ones on Patreon). Translating was never my forte—it was time-consuming and exhausting. I didn’t want to abandon it since I had already started, but now that someone else is handling it, I’ll happily step aside to focus on my own novels, especially my original one, which I’ll start publishing soon. The original novel isn’t serialized yet, but I plan to start in a few weeks. Its title is 'Incubus System: Demon King of Love and Lust'. It will have ecchi and smut elements, but not excessively. The main genres are action and fantasy, with academy life, romance, kingdom-building, and dungeon elements as well.
that's why yubelluna got the clown award...
In Yubelluna's mind, she was already planning for the future. There was no doubt the girl would accept; after all, who wouldn't jump at the chance of a better life with a noble? 🤡
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not all phoenixes have such eye colors. she got her eye color from her parents...
Her attention was locked onto the screen, her glowing yellow eyes reflecting the intensity of her concentration. All that mattered now was the game, and nothing could break her focus. [A/N: 😶]
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Phenex immortality is even weaker than that. It consumes mana and if they run out of mana, they die. Ban's immortal power is obviously better than this...
The flame that had once defined Riser flickered and died in her grasp. Riser gasped, his face pale with shock, his body trembling as he felt the loss of his power.
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Why would mc need it? Kouske is already immortal, has better flames and wind manipulation skills. So is there any need for it?
The flame that had once defined Riser flickered and died in her grasp. Riser gasped, his face pale with shock, his body trembling as he felt the loss of his power.
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I am slowing down so that he can catch up. It's better for me if someone else picks this up so that I can focus more on my novels...
Unfortunately, this story will have a large harem, but it won’t happen too quickly. The girls won’t just fall in love with him at first sight—I’ll take my time building their chemistry and relationships naturally. He will also have female friends, and not all of them will be love interests. There will be smut, but not too much, as I plan to focus more on the plot. Ultimately, this is a wish-fulfillment story, which is why I’ve put so much effort into having the MC save those who are suffering. However, I do plan to limit the harem, and if I ever write another DxD fanfic in the future, I’ll likely just skip to canon and limit the harem even furthur. That’s all I can say for now. I hope it answers all your questions.
This is how I originally wrote. People don't really like too much screen time for side characters and I am already pushing the limit as it is...
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[A/N: I think I have already said this before. But the number of powerstones that this fic receives is very low. It's quite disheartening and demotivating to see other fics that only just started serialising (most of them were smut fics, but obviously not all) with only a few chapters (8-13 chapters), getting so many powerstones (around 500) while mine has so few (only around 70). People really like smuts, huh? This fic will also contain heavy smuts, but only after the story develops a bit more. Maybe this fic isn't all that great. But I would like for those who enjoy this fic to donate some powerstones. Many people say that they always forget to donate stones or leave behind comments and reviews. But these small gestures of yours are what can genuinely make an author happy and motivate them to write better.
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original COTE:Oreki Houtarou's Strength-Supreme Classroom
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[For advanced chapters join my Patreon for only $2 or 5$! https://www.p@treon.com/Sol_Pendragon Just change @ to a It already has 25+ chapters more than WebNovel. Discord: https:// discord. com /invite/ mWw5zmrn Just remove all the spaces in between the words. Tell me if it's not working.] Oreki was admitted to an elite educational institution and placed in Class A. With his keen sense, he quickly understood what was different about this school. Just when he feels it might be troublesome, he awakens a system and he can get superpower rewards by completing tasks. Teleportation can allow him to go home and fall in love at any time, and transparency can eliminate his sense of existence. This life seems good and very energy efficient. Then he got telepathy. Sakayanagi Arisu: This school is so boring, but Oreki-san is very interesting. You can [play] with him. Horikita Suzune: Oreki, who doesn’t study at all, got higher scores than me. Sure enough, I didn’t work hard enough! I studied for 16 hours today. Karuizawa Kei: Houtarou, thank you for saving me when I was in junior high school. Please date me on the condition of marriage! Kushida Kikyo (regret): Clothes can’t retain fingerprints at all, so I just gave them away for free? ! (angry) “……” So even though you usually act serious, in the end, you are thinking about this? [T/N: I'm just translating it, not the real author.]141 Chs 6.4k Collections
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An ordinary person finds himself in the world of High School DxD (AU), where a System grants him immortality and the complete set of Vritra Sacred Gears. As he explores various worlds, he evolves into the Black Dragon King. Throughout his journey, he encounters and saves numerous heroines, forming deep bonds with them and gradually building a harem of companions. The story chronicles his quest for power, the challenges he faces, and the intricate relationships he develops across these diverse realms. The multiverse includes: High School DxD, Testament of Sister New Devil, High School of the Dead, Yuragi-sou no Yuuna, Danmachi, Black Clover, Campione, Jujutsu Kaisen, Tensura, My Hero Academia, Eminence in Shadow, Tower of God, To Love Ru, Prison School, Demon Slayer, Maou Gakuin no Hangyakusha, Magical Explorer, Mobuseka, Food Wars, Kaguya-sama: Love is War, Oregairu, and more. Disclaimer: Given the extensive range of worlds, the novel will be lengthy, focusing on slow, natural romance. Heroines won’t fall in love instantly; instead, their feelings and bonds will develop over time. There are about three chapters that might make you feel a bit uncomfortable. I actually forgot about their actual age while I was absorbed in writing, which resulted in a few uncomfortable early chapters. It was my blunder. But the later chapters are completely fine to read. This is my first time writing ever. So, I hope you will give this fic a chance. Happy reading.... Except for the original characters, none of the content or photos belong to me. All rights go to their respective owners. Your support on Patreon fuels this exciting adventure! Unlock Exclusive Content Early! Join my Patreon for just $2 or $5! https://www.p@treon.com/Sol_Pendragon (Change @ to a) It already has 15+ chapters more than WebNovel.124 Chs 14.8k Collections
all 5 dragon kings are mentioned in the original... so at least he won't be a dragon king...
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