UnknownReader_3739

1 years ago

Commented

I really hate these protagonist type persons.

"You shouldn't harm an innocent person, retreat at once or else i will—" Kevin tried to appear heroicly in this scene but his voice was cut short as Helix put his sword on his neck.

Domination of the Evil DragonLord

Fantasy · HAUNTED_FIRE_101

UnknownReader_3739

1 years ago

Commented

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

ch 14 Chapter 11- Cecilia Evelyn (1)

Domination of the Evil DragonLord

Fantasy · HAUNTED_FIRE_101

UnknownReader_3739

1 years ago

Posted

Well the story of the main character of this novel is very dominant and possessive. But the world background you have not correctly explained. Nice work, just update regularly.

Domination of the Evil DragonLord

Fantasy · HAUNTED_FIRE_101

UnknownReader_3739

1 years ago

Commented

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

ch 12 Chapter 12- Tuatha Dé domain

Reborn as World's Finnest Allrounder

Fantasy · HAUNTED_FIRE_101

UnknownReader_3739

1 years ago

Commented

Next chapter bro.

ch 0 8 Chapter 8- Lisia

Reborn as World's Finnest Allrounder

Fantasy · HAUNTED_FIRE_101

UnknownReader_3739

1 years ago

Posted

Hey bro! your wordlines have sometimes have massive gap between them. Correct that. I think rest are fine for now. Just update the chapters regularly.