Another Banger chapter can’t wait for the Venerbale face slaps. Who’s gonna stop him!!!
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Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES!!!!! This is truly the ultimate path of gains!!!! Senior Brother please continue this masterpiece!
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That’s what I am talking about! You really capture the essence of a character being out of their element really well!!! Please deliver another chapter of this masterpiece.
LESSSSS GOOOOOOO!!!!! Only complaint is that there isn’t another chapter!!! Take my stones for more motivation!!!
Take my power stones you mad man!
Omg, this was when Madara use the izanagi to save himself from Hashirama. That must mean he is developing the rinnegan in the background. 😈
Dan Heng took a good look, his brow furrowed. "It's not just that. The other eye… It's white but has the same pattern. Unless he has a very rare heterochromia, that's not normal." - (Dan Heng)
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Author, please don’t take what I say as wrong, but as criticism to help you out. You don’t need to add the name of the person speaking at the end of you sentences. Most people perfer the name to be at the end of the dialogue. Please keep up the good work.
The lines are fine if not unique and show character. I love the way you explain everything and keep everyone in character you my friend are a diamond in the rough! Please keep the chapters coming as I shower(throw) power stone at you!!!!
Well done! Who wants to live a life of mediocrity??? I wish you all the hopes and dreams in this fanfic of yours and your journey.
Keep up the amazing work brother, I can’t wait to see what you are cooking. I love that the whole world is against Fang Yuan and that he has to build up in order to reign supreme again.