Webnovel Author: feroshin - Fanfic Collection

great chapter thanks but most was an info dump. also is this past the time ash was there or is ash going to show up?

thanks for the chapter cant wait for the next one you did a great job on this one

thanks for the chapter :)

Thanks for the great chapter

it's a good chapter but you make the fight way to long at this one fight was 2 chapters long so if the next fight is as long or longer then people most will just skip it or stop reading the fic

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter. can you not put the description of the pokemon in as we can just look up the pokemon on google.

im glad you are back hope you did good in your exams :)

thanks for the great chapter.

thanks for the great chapter and i'm so glad you chose YveItaI as his last pokemon because it's my favourite pokemon from pokemon X and Y

thanks for the great chapter.

thanks for the great chapter. can't wait for the next one, also can he get yveltal or Trevenant

Thanks for the great chapter, hope you keep it going for a while

Thanks for the chapter.

time for the juggernaut to come :)

Thanks for the chapter cant wait for the next one

Thanks for the chapter. when are you going to use the new smithing ticket that he got form one of the quests?

no problem. can't wait for next chapter

thanks for the chapter