Moments 11
In the first chapter of the story you are already dictating what will happen. Are you the author? If not, how can you say that this will all happen? Do you know how to give constructive feedback? Or just had a bad day and want to take your anger out somewhere?
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 – Kusanagi Motohama.
DXD - The Rise of Motohama
Anime & Comics · Albion_Kusanagi
judicial process?
This chapter is very good. The idea at the end of Motohama having switched places with one of his shikigami clones was very good. If he received the memories of the destroyed Shikigami he could use this method to train, study, learn spells and much more.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4 – Battle of the Square.
DXD - The Rise of Motohama
Anime & Comics · Albion_Kusanagi
I really liked this idea of mixing DXD with Strike the blood. From what you can see, maybe humans have a bigger role in this fic. It was boring just to see fanfics in which the MCs are demons, angels or hybrids with dragons
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Kuoh Academy.
DXD - The Rise of Motohama
Anime & Comics · Albion_Kusanagi
I really enjoyed the chapter! The idea of putting a process on the two groups of demons makes sense. Making a formal record doesn't give them the chance to erase Motohama's memory without anyone knowing
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 – Kusanagi Motohama.
DXD - The Rise of Motohama
Anime & Comics · Albion_Kusanagi
The plot is very forced. The protagonist needs to have a better development in his personality. The author is clearly a fan of Issei, but tries to make him a better person which makes the story dull. The system itself is a system of sexual harassment at the very least and can lead to rape. It doesn't have much use other than picking up girls and has little presence throughout the chapters.
Ce livre a été supprimé.
I give up. There are many points I could mention, but the changes in the characters' personalities are very annoying. A boy comes out of nowhere and beats Sona at chess? Besides being a cliche, it's pretty hard to believe. The change in Issei personality made him even more boring than he already was.
Ce livre a été supprimé.
It's so cliche for the guy to transfer to the body of the protagonist, villain or supporting character. The idea of soul fusion is more interesting and far less used. As you don't want to read this story and no one is forcing you I'll even give a Power stone to the story just for not having a troll like you as one of the readers
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 – Kusanagi Motohama.
DXD - The Rise of Motohama
Anime & Comics · Albion_Kusanagi