TheKray

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1 years ago
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Drumroll please!

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1 years ago
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Intriguing enough.

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1 years ago
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Order. Yes I can read.

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1 years ago
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Haha🤣 okay👌.

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1 years ago
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Okay I'm currently at chapter 5 so maybe this review will not do the book much justice. However, writing quality is good. The author uses simple and easy to understand vocabulary. So five stars. The story itself seems interesting enough but once again I'm at chapter 5 but so far so good. The characters are okay. At least they don't seem like fillers or extras yet. A chapter a day is good but for binge readers like me I feel author should increase number of chapters per day. I think novel will get much stronger following then. World background- I'm at chapter five so... Overall, thumbs up author. Keep up the good work.

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1 years ago
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As far as prologues go, this was quite good. Just hope the story keeps it up.

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1 years ago
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I'm sold.

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1 years ago
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Blood rivers hmmm. I feel like authors do not have to necessarily perpetuate this stereotype.

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1 years ago
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Okayyyy.

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1 years ago
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I like, now off you go to my infamous dungeon library.

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