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And if i remeber right the waver is only for the second not the rest
ch 90 Kaito Chapter 90
(Kaito)
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yes but it was the referee that stop neji when he faced hinata and Gai saved lee no ? It's just doesn't make sense. Furthemore they are here to promote their village, and in the third it's public, if they were to be killed it would only be a loss in the third exam
ch 90 Kaito Chapter 90
(Kaito)
Anime & Comics · Tilct
Just so I understand, during the third test, they can't kill each other right, it's only allowed during the second ?
ch 90 Kaito Chapter 90
(Kaito)
Anime & Comics · Tilct
It's a shame. For my part, as a simple viewer, the choice to depict Rhaegar as you have will be more of a hindrance and lower the overall quality of your work (which is very high). You're doing a bit of what all Naruto fanfiction authors do with the character Hiruzen, but by creating a character who is just a "villain," you're taking away depth from your story. Moreover, in the universe of Game of Thrones, what interests us is knowing that there are no clear-cut good and evil characters. I believe you had established this well so far, but by portraying Rhaegar in this way, you've changed the direction of the narrative towards something more superficial. Of course, this is just my humble opinion, and know that I will continue reading because, to me, this is the first "mistake" you've made.
ch 35 Tourney at Harrenhal I
Robert I Baratheon
Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
Thank you
Dear author, I recall you mentioning in the previous chapter that Magneto would remember this moment in the years to come, kind of like an enemy he would forever fear, allowing you to have an additional character to develop as well as creating a character who can have an interesting relationship. Moreover, I'm not sure if killing off [the character] was necessary for Angel's development. Gilgamesh's wake-up call was sufficient. So, I hope you haven't decided to change your storyline just because some idiots asked you to. Please note this is not a negative critique; I just find it unfortunate to part ways with a character (Magneto) who could have been interesting, but if it's for the good of the storyline, then I have nothing more to say. THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER !!!!
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This increased the potential for food production by a lot, allowing Selwyn Tarth to import additional population for the development of the northern part of the island. Galladon's goal is to increase the population of Tarth to 1,5 – 2 million people in the next ten years. To achieve this goal a lot of slaves are needed to mine stones and reclaim farmland. Furthermore, he suggested at an elder meeting of House Tarth to build additional granaries and horde food, while grain prices are still low right now.
Game of Thrones: House of Tarth
TV · marcoo
LOL, I think the author should consider revisiting his chapter. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
The magical ability of his aura completely evaded the tragic fate of House Tarth and established his role as the male heir of the family firmly. After building up a close and respectful relationship with his father and mother, he finally confessed them his ability 8 years ago, but chose not to reveal them his knowledge about the possible future, as to not cause large differences to the future he knew. Only a secret known to a single person could be kept a secret for a long time.
Game of Thrones: House of Tarth
TV · marcoo
I really don't understand the timeline of his past life as Jon...
ch 16 A Feast
Dance of The Dragonwolf
TV · Drinnor
yep we just wasted time on this
I have no intention of telling readers how they should digest information, nor do I feel that I owe anyone an explanation beyond what is made implicit in the story.
Reborn as Jon Snow's Twin - (Game of Thrones)
TV · ssyffix
Seriously ?!!
For a few weeks, apart from eating and training with my two swords, I did nothing but try to find that light in me, nothing more, nothing less, I persisted for a long time on this path and finally, after a full month, I felt the indescribable feeling that swelled my heart with joy, seeing that my practice was paying off, I started using meditation every day, and a week later, I was able to "activate" this power as I wished.
Aegon Snow
Book&Literature · Ghostrider0002
doesn't he have mastered the flying thubder gid ?
ch 60 Kaito chapter 60
(Kaito)
Anime & Comics · Tilct
nice start
ch 0 4 Horrifying day in the dungeon
Rising Flames Within
Anime & Comics · Leegionlee_X
Alas... I believe you have no choice; it's for the greater good.
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maybe but in the last round where there will be thousand of people observing I'm not sure it's for the best that people kill each other in front of civilian and lords, I mean if they are in the last round that means that this are the best genin of their country, the loss of even one of them is terrible and in a world there is war near at every tile no country would accept this
ch 90 Kaito Chapter 90
(Kaito)
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