Imjustadev

Imjustadev

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2022-07-22 Joint Ascension Island
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Imjustadev
4 days ago
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this*

Imjustadev
Imjustadev
4 days ago
Commented

I don't give a shit what anyone says you have to make him get back at them like 10 times worse, fake his death for all I care, do the last scene from Ted 2 if you have to, I need you to do thia

Imjustadev
Imjustadev
5 days ago
Posted

amazing one of the best stories I've read in a while‌, writing and grammar are definitely way above average, the character design is also above average but with things that can be improved, updating stability and world background are very good, the only real issue is I can find in it is with some of the mc's decisions like compromising with blessings to keep the kid that's really it, I hope u continue this, and avoid the trope of mc keep being entangled in other people's problems.

Imjustadev
Imjustadev
9 days ago
Posted

99.999 percent chance that it's written using ai. Also, mc has no particular reason for doing stuff. One minute, he's all mysterious and shit. The next second, he's making issei strong for no reason

Imjustadev
Imjustadev
10 days ago
Commented

bro this is the third time akeno is saying this

Akeno, still slightly flustered but regaining her composure, shot Issei a playful smirk. "Jealous much? Maybe if you focused less on complaining and more on improving yourself, you'd learn a thing or two."

I want to be noblesse in dxd

I want to be noblesse in dxd

Anime et bandes dessinées · luciusxjune

Imjustadev
Imjustadev
10 days ago
Commented

you know, at some point, sooner or later, the plot is going to end, and then his system will be useless because there aren't any more significant events to witness, so I recommend you tweak the system a bit

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Imjustadev
Imjustadev
14 days ago
Posted

absolutely amazing fic, everything is great, not to nit pick or anything but sometimes and it's rare there are parts that are repeated (like a sentence) but using different words and that's the only problem, if you don't count that there isn't more chapters, great job authors I hope you keep posting regularly and don't drop it

Imjustadev
Imjustadev
18 days ago
Commented

bro, you tried to cook and burned the planet I don't know If you burned the planet for a better one (in the upcoming chapters, but I swear to God I'll murder you if his ass gets violated) or you just fumbled.

Imjustadev
Imjustadev
24 days ago
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Imjustadev
Imjustadev
24 days ago
Posted

although I lt was written using ai it was good enough, till Emma frost came looking for the mc, told him come with me to my academic (mc being a fucking idiot went, I mean your own mother sold you, how could you trust a stranger saying let me train you and be apart of my team, he was probably mind fked), then just trains with the hellions and let's Emma frost check all his memories.

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