CoachPipe

Here we go

Look, I didn't mean to be rude, but can you read? I said if you don't want them to be together that's fine, but don't make her spit on the opportunity he gave her in her career, because you wrote it as if she was doing that, and in her dialogue with Troy she said "I I don't want to be like Emma" and at the end of the chapter Troy went to resolve the unfinished business with Emma that still bothers him, I made these comments because I like the story, and a lot of people like it too, but you can't see that I'm giving my opinion so that you don't make these mistakes throughout the story, but No, you were offended, so this is where you lose one of your fans

Okay, I understand that months have passed, but you didn't make any developments on this, on Emily's thoughts, and this change was very out of the blue, so the way you wrote it seemed like a lot of ingratitude on her part, which wasn't supposed to be like this, considering that you showed us that she was always kind and attentive

Let's ignore the fact that she's dating an older guy while she's a minor, she who until a few chapters ago was blushing when he said she was his girlfriend, suddenly left him in the friendzone bringing up the subject of Emma who still weighs heavily on him, if it were leaving him in the friendzone, do it in a way that isn't rude, like she called herself his "friend", not like she spat on how much he helped her career, so sorry author, I'll stay for a few more chapters, But I don't know if I can handle this turn in the story that's making these characters unbearable

I think Troy in this chapter is pathetic, like he just ended the relationship, because Emma wasn't mature enough, and now he's not being mature even though he handled the situation with a lot of maturity, like out of nowhere he stopped being mature ? So that's it author, we want to see the troy that has been developed so far, not the one in this chapter.