drragoon

drragoon

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18 years old. I was always at the bottom of my class in terms of English scores. But I kinda like writing stories so here I am. ----------------- Current status: writing stories

2022-06-26 Joint Australia
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drragoon
drragoon
1 years ago
Posted

I would like to state that this is another random novel I may or may not drop due to my lack of knowledge in both Animes. I will definitely have at least 20 long chapters but that would be whenever I feel like it. But if I do get a lot of viewership, it will definitely encourage me to continue this journey as I will feel confident in my writing.

drragoon
drragoon
2 years ago
Replied to Leo_Bassist

Quite busy irl with school so like… I will try to do chapters atleast once per week or if I am free then twice per week.

drragoon
drragoon
2 years ago
Posted

Changed the story and getting rid of the OC you guys despise lmao. I will focus on Kenpachi now don't worry. I aint clickbaiting. I would judge writing quality *not good*, my stability of updates will be like whenever I feel like it, story development is *meh*, character design I find *managable* and world background is *yikes*. I'm not a die hard fan of both Bleach and One Piece so note that most of it would be from imagination(especially how they attack).

drragoon
drragoon
2 years ago
Posted

The story flows really well with the use of many descriptive words to help readers picture in their mind multiple scenes within a certain part. The ‘Status’ looks phenomenal with great layering out. The character interaction is amazing as it is my first time seeing such a writer being nitty gritty towards their writing. I will give this a 4.4/5 for great effort.

drragoon
drragoon
2 years ago
Replied to ObamaUchiha

Indeed, I was already planning on it.

drragoon
drragoon
2 years ago
Replied to Petang

Yes.

drragoon
drragoon
2 years ago
Replied to Michael_J_Williams_0745

Thank you. I'm currently working on making new chapters as we speak. :D

drragoon
drragoon
2 years ago
Replied to SleepingForestKing

Thank you for your feedback. :D

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drragoon
2 years ago
Replied to ObamaUchiha

I will definitely take this feedback into consideration.

"You… why are you expressing your appreciation to the sacrifice that was put into the meals that were made possible?"

Kenpachi in One Piece World

Kenpachi in One Piece World

Anime & Comics · drragoon

drragoon
drragoon
2 years ago
Replied to ObamaUchiha

I will take that into consideration.

The Zushi Zushi no mi was eaten by Aoki before he had encountered Smoker. He felt a sudden rise of power. Information transmitting towards his mind like a hurricane overturning cities. He was in the initial stages of perceiving gravity. It's not a Devil Fruit you could instantly use.

Kenpachi in One Piece World

Kenpachi in One Piece World

Anime & Comics · drragoon