Thanks. Your story is great, the plot and things. And Hirochi is very brave, enough to poison his mind thinking he can save everyone without external help.
But Hiroshi didn't listen to the villagers at all. His mind was set on fulfilling the promise he made to his mother.
Eclipse Arcana
Fantasy · MS_Studio_3460
Great novel, the start is good and the pacing is just right. Highly recommended.
Hahahahaha... that's funny.
"Just kill us and leave him alone!" the villagers cried out, unable to bear seeing Hiroshi being tortured any longer.
Eclipse Arcana
Fantasy · MS_Studio_3460
Hmm...
Hiroshi came back to his senses as he heard the leader's voice. He tightened his grip on his father's sword. "I promised my mother I'll save everyone," Hiroshi said, more determined than ever.
Eclipse Arcana
Fantasy · MS_Studio_3460
I thought his promise was to get help from someone? hmm... maybe I didn't understand the sentence right.
But Hiroshi didn't listen to the villagers at all. His mind was set on fulfilling the promise he made to his mother.
Eclipse Arcana
Fantasy · MS_Studio_3460
It's a great read and would invoke curiosity to its readers. The pacing is not that fast but still not that boring. So, I highly recommend this to people with high enough patience.
Well, he's way too calm even after experiencing things that were out of this world.
There's not much for me to, just some concern about the MC's system. When I think about it, there's no need for the MC to work hard, he can just invest and invest then he'll get 10x rebate. That's why I'm hoping for the author to give a proper limitation its benefits. Moreover, in perspective, not all people are that easygoing. That they would help someone just by knowing their name or something, but I might be wrong. Maybe there's some hidden agenda or whatnot. Anyway, it's a good read.
I'll use that $300,000 to renovate the place to become big, buy another loads of supplies, and the next thing I'll see will be my bank account having $3,000,000. Easy life.
[ Congratulations! $30,000 invested. You have received $300,000 in your bank account. New bank account balance is $300,010]
Ten Times Investment Rebate System
Urban · Ndoba
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original THE NEW WORLD: RISE OF THE REPLICATOR
25 years ago, a dungeon that connected one dimension to another appeared on earth. Its arrival brought chaos and disaster as monsters species came out from it, indiscriminately killing people. When humans were on the verge of extinction, common people began to awaken supernatural abilities that can fight against those monsters and they were now called "Hunters”. Ran Datu on the other hand were only able to awaken at the age of 25 as an Frank. However, he's different from the rest as he was awakened through a system. Granting him the ability to replicate almost everything.7 Chs 8 Collections
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