It’s a Bad Idea To Have Him Physically be there
Way not Wendy they same age
Sherry Blendy
Anime & Comics · Ereh_Kun
How is the titan bloodline from attack on Titans powerful and that’s the dumbest idea to give him that he going to grow super big and become a target
She’s a keeper because she has a treasure hunting ability it’s great for Alchemist or he upgrades the small void dragon bloodline
Stupid what retard made this 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
This ruins the story just say you’re rob what’s the difference and it creates the feeling its not real
"Well, yes. You're just a character I'm writing. I did indeed kill you and bring you before me." I don't know why, but I don't feel angry with him at all.
Anime & Comics · TheHandOfAuthor
What is this Pokemon
The angels nodded in unison, accepting your presence and significance. Veldanava then turned back to you, his expression warm and encouraging. "Welcome, Sun Dragon. Your journey begins now, and with it, a new chapter unfolds for all of us."
Anime & Comics · Gottle_17
You’re story is basically All over like you skipped all of how started his pack and his organization and his growth and I don’t think there were mate bonded in marvel or just add it to keep harem small you just left out a lot and I don’t care if you do flashbacks because its going to fail like a lot of other fanfic were they skip over like all there childhood and teen years and adult years and go right to all powerful organization or all powerful character I just think most of all them fail ps you lost a lot of content because his character journey is basically complete like the rest of the story will be him getting together with other 2 Women in his harem and beating up super villains and getting his last step in his plans we don’t know and the things like the Japan/china mc face slapping
Hey are you going to do something with mutants or aliens or inhumans
Dude there’s only 3 Reasons Someone Read Fanfic 1 Women So you making oc women as Female lead when there already beautiful women there just drops the Value 2 Fighting and Chad man with no Harem which are boring because all they are either I keep getting stronger or making a kingdom and with the kingdom ones or nobles they have more wives because to build stronger alliances 3 peaceful And world building And Slice of life And Farmer Other things more peaceful Can be mix of both
And no this is not a harem fanfic. Because I don't like harem fanfic at all it just doesn't show any logic behind it so I don't like Harem. OC lover will be another OC I created.
Reincarnated in Bleach with wishes.
Anime & Comics · Z3N0x