Wow.. Getting more interesting.. Wish I could wrote like you..
Jay responded, "If Mom sees me this banged up and covered in blood, she'll freak out. The infirmary is on this floor. I'll get patched up before heading home. By tomorrow, I won't be fully healed, but the bruises on my face will fade. I can cover the rest with long sleeves. You know how freakishly fast I recover, right?"
Fantasy · MN_1223
So, he had the enhanced healing (in a way) before even the Alpha program.. Hmm.. That's okay I guess..
Jay responded, "If Mom sees me this banged up and covered in blood, she'll freak out. The infirmary is on this floor. I'll get patched up before heading home. By tomorrow, I won't be fully healed, but the bruises on my face will fade. I can cover the rest with long sleeves. You know how freakishly fast I recover, right?"
Fantasy · MN_1223
So, he did to them exactly what they wanted to do to him.. Nice. I like it..
"First, I'll start by chopping off your arms, piece by piece, then your legs, followed by your ears, nose, and tongue, turning you into a hideous living thing. But I'm not done yet. I'll scrape the skin off your body, puncture holes in your muscles, and finally gouge out your eyes. How does that sound? To me, it sounds delicious."
Fantasy · MN_1223
Inspiration?
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Fantasy · MN_1223
So, he is like Moro now, the War Asura?
The goon blocked a few, but one kick landed squarely on his temple, causing him to stumble. Jay pressed his advantage, moving in close and targeting the pressure points on the goon's arms and legs. He struck with pinpoint accuracy, causing the goon to cry out in pain as his limbs went numb.
Fantasy · MN_1223
Mark and Richard? Richard is just entering the Command Center.
They finished their meal for ten minutes and headed back to the command center. There, Mark and Richard were present. As for the Chief of Staff, well they were busy doing their roles and upholding their responsibilities. They'll be briefed on what had happened in the meeting when it concluded. But most of the time, it's only four of them that discuss the next move.
Sci-fi · Faux1231
This is why he lost his trust on anyone, except his family. I get it now..
The goon chuckled, relishing the scene before him. "Pathetic, isn't it? Loyalty can be bought so easily when fear is involved. Our boss—" He cut himself off, but the slip was already made. "Let's just say he's going to have fun beating the crap out of you."
Fantasy · MN_1223
Why is the pills not removed yet. It is going to be a tragedy if they escape. They are powerful and could be a great asset.
"In two days…they'll try to extract the pill out of the two and hopefully turn them into our side like we did to Andrea," Richard said. "They are still knocked out thanks to the sedative we are injecting into them everyday. We can't have them rampaging."
Sci-fi · Faux1231
It is good you want the old chapters to be more engaged like the present. I'll start reading again, from the 1st I guess..
I've been working on significantly enhancing the earlier chapters of this story. When I started three years ago, my writing wasn't as descriptive or engaging as it is now, and I left quite a few loopholes.
Fantasy · MN_1223
Write*
Jay responded, "If Mom sees me this banged up and covered in blood, she'll freak out. The infirmary is on this floor. I'll get patched up before heading home. By tomorrow, I won't be fully healed, but the bruises on my face will fade. I can cover the rest with long sleeves. You know how freakishly fast I recover, right?"
Earth's Alpha Prime
Fantasy · MN_1223