McCaulay

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2022-05-23 Joint India
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McCaulay
McCaulay
4 days ago
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Jay responded, "If Mom sees me this banged up and covered in blood, she'll freak out. The infirmary is on this floor. I'll get patched up before heading home. By tomorrow, I won't be fully healed, but the bruises on my face will fade. I can cover the rest with long sleeves. You know how freakishly fast I recover, right?"

Earth's Alpha Prime

Earth's Alpha Prime

Fantasy · MN_1223

McCaulay
McCaulay
4 days ago
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Wow.. Getting more interesting.. Wish I could wrote like you..

Jay responded, "If Mom sees me this banged up and covered in blood, she'll freak out. The infirmary is on this floor. I'll get patched up before heading home. By tomorrow, I won't be fully healed, but the bruises on my face will fade. I can cover the rest with long sleeves. You know how freakishly fast I recover, right?"

Earth's Alpha Prime

Earth's Alpha Prime

Fantasy · MN_1223

McCaulay
McCaulay
5 days ago
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So, he had the enhanced healing (in a way) before even the Alpha program.. Hmm.. That's okay I guess..

Jay responded, "If Mom sees me this banged up and covered in blood, she'll freak out. The infirmary is on this floor. I'll get patched up before heading home. By tomorrow, I won't be fully healed, but the bruises on my face will fade. I can cover the rest with long sleeves. You know how freakishly fast I recover, right?"

Earth's Alpha Prime

Earth's Alpha Prime

Fantasy · MN_1223

McCaulay
McCaulay
10 days ago
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So, he did to them exactly what they wanted to do to him.. Nice. I like it..

 "First, I'll start by chopping off your arms, piece by piece, then your legs, followed by your ears, nose, and tongue, turning you into a hideous living thing. But I'm not done yet. I'll scrape the skin off your body, puncture holes in your muscles, and finally gouge out your eyes. How does that sound? To me, it sounds delicious."

Earth's Alpha Prime

Earth's Alpha Prime

Fantasy · MN_1223

McCaulay
McCaulay
11 days ago
Commented

Inspiration?

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Earth's Alpha Prime

Earth's Alpha Prime

Fantasy · MN_1223

McCaulay
McCaulay
16 days ago
Commented

So, he is like Moro now, the War Asura?

The goon blocked a few, but one kick landed squarely on his temple, causing him to stumble. Jay pressed his advantage, moving in close and targeting the pressure points on the goon's arms and legs. He struck with pinpoint accuracy, causing the goon to cry out in pain as his limbs went numb.

Earth's Alpha Prime

Earth's Alpha Prime

Fantasy · MN_1223

McCaulay
McCaulay
17 days ago
Commented

Mark and Richard? Richard is just entering the Command Center.

They finished their meal for ten minutes and headed back to the command center. There, Mark and Richard were present. As for the Chief of Staff, well they were busy doing their roles and upholding their responsibilities. They'll be briefed on what had happened in the meeting when it concluded. But most of the time, it's only four of them that discuss the next move.

Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

Sci-fi · Faux1231

McCaulay
McCaulay
18 days ago
Commented

This is why he lost his trust on anyone, except his family. I get it now..

The goon chuckled, relishing the scene before him. "Pathetic, isn't it? Loyalty can be bought so easily when fear is involved. Our boss—" He cut himself off, but the slip was already made. "Let's just say he's going to have fun beating the crap out of you."

Earth's Alpha Prime

Earth's Alpha Prime

Fantasy · MN_1223

McCaulay
McCaulay
20 days ago
Commented

Why is the pills not removed yet. It is going to be a tragedy if they escape. They are powerful and could be a great asset.

"In two days…they'll try to extract the pill out of the two and hopefully turn them into our side like we did to Andrea," Richard said. "They are still knocked out thanks to the sedative we are injecting into them everyday. We can't have them rampaging." 

Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

Sci-fi · Faux1231

McCaulay
McCaulay
22 days ago
Commented

It is good you want the old chapters to be more engaged like the present. I'll start reading again, from the 1st I guess..

I've been working on significantly enhancing the earlier chapters of this story. When I started three years ago, my writing wasn't as descriptive or engaging as it is now, and I left quite a few loopholes.

Earth's Alpha Prime

Earth's Alpha Prime

Fantasy · MN_1223

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    Monster World - Pet Integration

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    In a world where monsters roam freely after an unknown power brought them from who knows where. After years of fighting the monsters, the humans in this world learn to integrate with monsters and turn them into their pets. The integration will take place in the final year of schooling after they reach the age of 16 and join the military for 4 years which is mandatory for anyone. MC is an orphan who is lives in an orphanage since childhood. He wants to grow strong so he can live his life better than how it was in the orphanage. He fights to become one of the strongest people on the planet. But fate has other plans for him as he gains friends along the way. New chapters every week. This is my first story. Please do share your comments and help me grow. Note: The cover art is not mine. It is created for me by one of my friends.

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