Suddendarknes

Overall, I liked it! It's not my usual type of read, but I enjoyed it, it's interesting, the writing is tight and flows well and I don't see any major flaws other than the a few minor things I pointed out. I think you'll do well with fans of the genre!

This has to be the best thing I've read yet. I didn't like most of the anime/novel you wrote about, but you "fixed" all the problems I had such as them being way to long with way too much filler. I love that you changed through the stories fast enough that nothing was boring. The jokes have to be the best part it works perfectly I never went more than a few chapters without laughing.