The whole thing is too cringy .Its too much.
Really? Professor? And really just saying "I am fine with it " .If you are btaindead then may be.Donot give excuse that he is not Naruto and is a cultivator but he should atleast ask about someyhing inheritance which might be useful for him.Is his logic gone tjere that if he had already done many things then do you think asking more questions was not on the table? Really just say "It makes sense " and just be naive and believe what third hokage day haha and I thought he is mature no I can clearly see he is braindead. But he is cultivator ,what can you expect.Loosing memory is good excuse . What a waste
I will change the review when anything Makes sense .Jumping from one place to another is just ridiculous.Too much susoense and no heads or tails is not a good start .Not even a clue of why is Naruto like this and what is different should be indicated not like this mysterious.If you wanted to just skip Naruto then do it no need to scam people as the first part or what happened to Naruto is just not mentioned .Hiruzen comes and tells about his mother Hiruzen dies .How the fuck would hiruzen tell him about his father during a battle when he died . You are just making mysterious stories which will get boring .It may be early but this is nonsense .I will see how the story goes then think about improving review if any at all. Nit even Flashbacks , just doing slice of life like thinks and all that what bullshit and Naruto is philosophical .Emperor of uzumaki all that by the time you move firward you will have so much to explain as atleast now everything needed to be explained
So his films are basicly doing worse than originals then ? Because I clearly remember Bodygyard grossing over $400 Million. And Few Good Men also grossed over $200 Million I think I assume they are still running in theatres ?
Listen people may say I am negatice but I literally have nothing to say .You are going too fast paced and even if we see in fanfiction basis and anime basis this is really unrealistic unless its a crack fic .There are many things that is just ridiculous .A 3 year old kids no matter whoever it is cannot do stuff.This is too much crack . I am not even complaining about AU stuff you added as that can be used if you put thought to it .I suggest you read the stories you write and think a little .A spar with Hokage was the most dumbest thing I have ever seen .Its like watching Original Naruto got lot dumber and insane . He is three .Even if he reincarnated .I mean swriously even in ninja world .Do you not know somethings are not possible even as four year old? . The fic idea is not bad but come on it feels like it is really written. By a three year old child. Too much Bullshit MC . Op is fine but this is too much nonsense going around
What a nonsense .If they are this strong then whats point to go to ninja academy .Its just starting class .Really Konoha academy will do it one day ? And the nonsense of everyone bullying and targeting MC is rirdiculous Yes the bullying happens but the hostile gazes something like that is ridiculus .
Why does it seem like every movie ia doing tptal $190 Million globally I mean really? Also it will be good if Final box office is mentioned for movies Arthur makes or mentioned in the novel.Also Why every movie Arthur make is nearly same amount? IT feels monotone there as sometimes movies goes low or high if you just put a round figure of 100 in every movie or just reverse it by less than 100 in Domestic and 70-80 overseas .Feels strange and his movie are making less grossing than the mentioned original did
Its because it is the same Novel.There are many novels like this which were translated halfway and left. I hope thia guya doensot do that
All chineese Novels are same whethee you start as any clan member or anyone the MC will get sharingan and wood release evntually .What a waste it had to go to getting sharigan and all that .All chineese novels Mc In anyway always gets sharingan how pathetic can these peooles's brain be .I mean it was a good premiss and started well then all went dowbhill with him getting sharingan some how I gues its blood succession limit and blah blah .I am ranting the author not the translator here mind you.! Does the author doesnot know how to communicate .In most CN novels Mcs are just monologing and acting cold or smile like sunshine and handsome notbing else .I nean how delusional to be that MC is doing all this .He has no interactions with others and he is doing whatever he wants in leaf village ? What nonsense
Well reading names like xia mu ,chong li ,bong li does make me not make me interested in. A marvel story because it feels funny but It is still better than the trash mtl .
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