TFTC
FINALLY a HOTD fanfic, I've been looking for one for a while and I've read comments that there are several but they all end up being either with a system or an incoherent crossover, I hope your story is constant, much success author!
Can you publish the first chapter of your next novel in this one? so I can know when it is released
really good
The idea in general is good, but I feel that you advance the story a lot without really telling anything, the good thing about a story is the details, you leave many gaps assuming that the reader can fill the space with what he knows about the movies, for example no. You explain why your character has a different last name, you don't explain why he awakened his powers, it is implied that he already lived in Forks but as if he didn't know anyone, if the Cullens are the same ones from the movies, you I invite you to rewrite your chapters and add more things, the story has potential it just lacks substance
Dante?
Besides, he knew two of the strongest Pokemon champions of two regions would be Generalists- Cynthia and Dante.
Pokemon: A Gym Leader's Rise(SI)
Anime & Comics · MrMime24
with alice ?
How elegant that chapter 100 is the one that introduces the Kamado family, well done author!
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original Pokemon Champion Chronicles
Failures, frustrations and anger, what better second chance could you ask for than waking up in the Pokemon world? Just please don't think it will be easier. If you want to support me to improve the translation and contribute to history: patreon.com/Jayjayempi15 Chs 269 Collections
give a advice when You have a new fanfic please! i don't have a idea of this
Modern Family: New Life
TV · Nathe07