The translation quality is really good. Keep going.
Man, it's annoying. Please, don't use Chinese names, it doesn't feet the setting.
"High-quality wheat from Hejian Land, only 2 copper stars per pound! Come and see, this is the best wheat, full of grains, and definitely at the lowest price!"
Game Of Thrones : Merchant of Two Worlds
TV · Mythic_Muse
Everything is fine. But would be nice if you use real names from Game of thrones instead of Chinese names, it's just weird.
In my opinion, try to refine his power system with genuine shorts comings that's he have to overcome, because Sukuna powers are not omnipotent, he have to outgrow Sukuna's level to survive. In my opinion mc is too over confident, and even women are falling for him too easily. He needs to get some character development, some trama? But don't try to change his personality now. Just keep improving him through his experience, let him learn and evolve. Also, would love if you can keep an arc continuous... I don't know if it's the correct word. But the pacing is weird, sometimes mc get a longius in just one chapter and then he is going on a date for 2 chapters. It would have been more nice to see him planning his moves. since they are saying he is smart and sees bigger picture. So we need the moments where we see him really thing and planning his moves. because for me he a psycho who does what he wants. And again, pacing! Important stuff happens too fast and unimportant doesn't.
I hope he gets six eyes(upgraded to see all energy).
Since we're seeing first person pov, he should've seen the light on his own orange mask.
Zetsu emerged from the shadows, his split face twisted into a scowl. His footsteps echoed on the stone floor as he walked toward me. The firelight glinted off my orange mask as I watched him approach.
Reincarnated as Naruto with Sukuna's Powers
Anime & Comics · MyMumCallsMePig
I have a mtl recommendation if you are interested in resident evil universe. It's called something like Evolution start from resident evil. I've read 30 something chapters and quit enjoyed it, just hope you will give it a try and see if you are interested in translation.
And on top of that he wants to stop the rumbling so bad, but doesn't have the gut to kill Eren or Grisha. But he have the guts to kill people of shiganshina? where the logic?
- Special Skills: Exceptional intelligence and situational judgment.
I Became the Villain in Attack on Titan
Anime & Comics · Shiniro_Yang
That may be true. But don't tell me he is smarter than even Zeke Jaeger, because till now I don't find his actions much smarter. He is just following the original plot most of the time, the only difference is Annie and some other women will like him because of the plot convience.
- Special Skills: Exceptional intelligence and situational judgment.
I Became the Villain in Attack on Titan
Anime & Comics · Shiniro_Yang
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original Battle Through the Heavens: God of Elements
"This is the world of Dou Qi, the paradise of the strong. Lu Yunxiao emerges from the void, his left hand sparkling with gold qi, his right hand engulfed in heavenly Flame, beneath him the Holy River flows, and behind him, endless divine thunder roars. The continent stretches endlessly, nurturing countless powerful individuals. In this tumultuous world, he is destined to rise and fall!"74 Chs 714 Collections
You should edit this sentence. My suggestion is, "Many people give up not because they don't want to work hard, but because they can't see see the progress from their efforts."
Many people don't give up because they don't want to work hard; they choose to give up because they can't see the progress from their efforts.
Naruto: Progress System
Anime & Comics · Yamasama