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I love your writing style! The inner per talks, the dialogs, it is funny, witty and deep at the same time which is a rare thing on this platform. You are a gem!

Such a pleasant read! A complex and beautiful story written in a fluid style! I particularly loved Leo and Amadeus, kind souls!❤️ And loved the story that didn’t drag unnecessarily!

It is the author’s choice to view it constructively. I respect the author’s effort and my manner of conveying my message or comment is straightforward and not sugar-coated.

At first, I got the impression of a good story, an intricately well written complex plot and eventually a beautiful love story. but, here we are over 200 smth chapters deep and we still get an immature dialog/relationship between the main characters, zero communication and an incoherent story with here and there some pompous words, overall with abrupt jumps through the chapters. It is disappointing when the authors drag the story for whatever reason. It's a fantasy world the authors are supposed to feed. Instead, some drag and stagnate. Not very cordially to the readers that pay.

Ooooo, thank you very much!

What does AVOT mean from the title? Thank you!

Barton is my favourite😂❤️

Beautiful story and realms! Thank you!🙏

Just a friendly reminder: you make use of the syntagma ‘sporting a smile/grin etc.’ abusively… I am sure that you can ‘sport’ your imagination a bit to make use of other beautifull synonyms, as they are plenty.