Kinglong9090

Kinglong9090

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2022-01-17 Joint Global
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Kinglong9090
Kinglong9090
2 months ago
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honestly this is getting boring, he just has this weak and small facade, he is very passive, you are trying to copy Aizen, but even Aizen was respected for his strength!.

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Kinglong9090
Kinglong9090
2 months ago
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Because he is so passive, he seems useless in front of everyone!

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Kinglong9090
3 months ago
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I don't know why every time someone creates a DC fanfic they are all foolish heroes with a hero complex like the one you wrote, most of them must have dreams of becoming heroes or something!

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Kinglong9090
Kinglong9090
3 months ago
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Honestly he looks pathetic, now he's going to become a hero who doesn't kill because he thinks he doesn't have the right, like Batman, if that's the case I'm out!

Kinglong9090
Kinglong9090
4 months ago
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Honestly, what a useless distribution of statistics!

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Kinglong9090
Kinglong9090
5 months ago
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Honestly, MC is a complete idiot, at first he was looking for the manipulator and now his wife was raped and he doesn't do anything, useless!

Kinglong9090
Kinglong9090
5 months ago
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simply because it seems that his knights seem so weak!.

Kinglong9090
Kinglong9090
6 months ago
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honestly how come the uzumaki myth doesn't have the authority to do anything, even in the anime and manga she demonstrated that she had strength and authority over practically everyone while she was alive, and giving her technique to konoha was a bad choice, he could have invented something and saying that only he could use it, thus attributing more value to it, bad choice!

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Kinglong9090
Kinglong9090
6 months ago
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Honestly, I'm going to stop reading here, every fanfic that involves lookism the protagonists say they will be free and think only of themselves, but in the end they are always good and don't do anything bad, next time don't give false hope, goodbye! .