josh_haywood

just a little tip, but when the characters are talking in their head, use 'this' instead of "this", it makes it easier for the reader to perceive and digest what is being read also using quotation mark for both is realy confusing. please and thank

okay just realised my coment was very pointless because just after like four or five locked chapter they've just straight up scraped the passes and is forcing you to use coin with the privilege crap if you want to continue reading which Is fucked since this novel definitely is worth that treatment nd probably never will to be honest. also, the approach is kind of giving me ptd from the hack system novel where they did the same thing, and after about 10 mabey, 15 chapter just dropped it out of nowhere, which saying anything, so if you do read this I'd advise you not to pay until told other wise to be honest. nunux, my guy. You do know that if you keep pulling these moves, you are more than likely going to gain an unrecoverable stained reputation and eventually have zero fans and readers. which is sad because from what i have read from the novel you've made, they are really good. you are a really good writer and have incredible potential which you are just wasting and not taking seriously because what seems like is clouded my you greed for money and to make a quick buck with doing as little as possible. Trust me, my, if you actually took your writing seriously and not just think of the short-term benefit, then you will definitely bring more benefits/make way more you are right now. I really do hope that you read this properly and think about it seriously as well as possible. concider it

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