Hydration - Profile

Confused? why is your first thought of "the taste of despair" is ntr? first thought i thought of is getting beaten to a damn pulp, manipulated, betrayed, fighting against an enemy he cant defeat and kills his lover or best friend and here you go with ntr

Absolutely enjoying the novel so far! Just wish it had more stable updates! If your able to message me i wouLd love to support the novel through patreon or donating so you can continue the novel i just love the premise of the story!

Hmm, theres a lot to improve on this novel it has a actual pretty good theme but theres literally no world building from the start of the novel. we know nothing about the main character except being a demon the system is barely used(only for good karma)but it has such the potential for more the entire novel has potential to be more than it is. for r-18 scenes i definetly recommend you skimming through leveling through lust its very similar to this story but with the right characters and world building. The character themselves are very 2-d with no substance theres only literally one sentence dialouge throughout every conversation it seems superficial. It may seem like im shitting on this novel too much which i am its just i see the potential it could be other than that keep improving and keep writing and ill keep supporting!

Keep up the amazing work! Ive only read till about 30 something chapters but i love the novel already. It just seems off though as the main character of his own novel he shouldnt strive to be arrogant but to be cold and calculative. he should know the characters habits skills moves the vital points of monsters events that are happening, treasures, characters likes and dislikes but it just seems like a snobby arrogant person for now. the world building is particular and the chapters feel rushed the main character is already saying i have to get stronger when he hasnt really done anything to warrant it. take some time writing the character dialouge add some comedic value even if it stretches the chapters a bit more.

Keep up the good work, big fan of your novels especially The Bored Immortal! One thing i would suggest is more character development and dialouge between characters even if it streatches the novel or chapter a bit.