Thanks for the chapter
Nah it ain’t a translation
You shouldve had isagi be the one eliminate someone else in the team who never made it past the first selection because when isagi eliminated kira in canon it gave him that satisfaction of elimination someone stronger and started to develop his ego and now you’ve given that whole experience to kira im hopeing in the future you make isagi super selfish or something because so far his just been passive even with the new personality
A knot of sympathy tightening in his chest.
Blue Lock: Limitless
Anime & Comics · Slipier
Shouldn’t igarahi have the ball since his ranked 300 in pretty sure who ever Is the worse player gets the ball?
With swift precision, he kicked the ball toward Igarashi.
Blue Lock: Limitless
Anime & Comics · Slipier
Other then a bit more descriptive writing on who the main personality is and if it’s isagi a bit more of a reaction out of him because essentially he just got new memories from Luke plus a system but hasn’t really reacted to it just glanced over it making it seem like it not really a big deal in stead of making him go straight into blue lock you should’ve made a chapter of him trying to understand what happened and why he got the system also did he receive memories from Luke like the future or anything containing blue lock?
What’s the point in this like character if he doesn’t know anything at all or has taken over Isagi body other then give isagi a system that in theory be making home freak out just wondering if you can expand on this since you haven’t given much info towards it
Are you on about that she was willing to move to America before he said Rachel’s name because if you are then your wrong because she was willingly going to move she gave Ross a ultimatum saying that there relationship won’t work unless you do as I say basically
Don’t worry to much about it everyone makes mistakes your story’s still enjoyable 👍🏻
An: hey guys. Took a little break. I think those are good. Especially when you want to write without error. I know some mistakes were in the first couple chapters. I'll try to keep those to a minimum. About to see the history of lance's family. Here we go.
the original hybrid of twilight
Movies · Brogdawg32
That women writer from the show actually hated the actress who played Bonnie I think she was racist or something she was all ways trying to kill her off but the viewers liked her her to much so she couldn’t
A/N: In case you haven't noticed, I've been avoiding writing from Elena's point of view for a while due to my immense dislike of her character. I tried not to let my bias work against me there so let me know what you think.
Witchy Woes
TV · OriginalMaker
Smart it’s something I see I spy doing if anything I do feel like he would still be looking for a weakness he can exploit tho since he’s a spy and all
"Although it might be hard to believe, that was my initial plan. I have no intentions of controlling your actions. No, I don't think that's possible. Instead, I believe working together is more suitable for global security. I'm not like those rancid, outdated politicians who want to have everything under their control," he said sincerely.
Still Defiant! SI-OC [Marvel/DC]
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader