Nameless742

Thanks for the chapter. I know I commented this on the last chapter but I’m going to say it again, please don’t make the same mistakes as A Magical Journey. No love triangle, no vault that alters personality, and no edgy crime fighting at the end. Just choose a love interest and stick with it. Whether it’s Daphne or the potter twin I personally don’t mind (even though daphne makes more sense.)

I can see the influence of A Magical Journey in this story, but please for the love of god don’t do the whole love triangle thing with hope and daphne. There are three things in A Magical Journey that stop me from reading it again, the love triangle, the sin vault and the edgy-ness at the end. Please avoid these and the story could honestly be better than A Magical Journey.

Imagine the plot twist of him being dead and is wondering around as a ghost without realising and that’s why the students are scared of him and he can see through the cloak. I know it’s not the case but imagine how unique that would be.

Personally, I was hoping for a Daphne pairing mainly because I have a soft spot for the character. But I can see how a hermione pairing would work.

How come you said there 30+ chapters on Patreon but there’s only a few on there when I checked? Is mine bugged or is it a future plan?

It’ll probably make more sense for it to happen next year, an extra year to mature, gives her the summer to digest the whole chamber situation and you could maybe tie the lack of action by dumbledore and the teachers from that year into whatever you have planned for her 3rd year so it triggers the start of her own views. Honestly, I’m just looking forward to being able to binge read this once it’s finished. There’s not many HP fics that are easy to read through a second time. ‘A magical journey’ was good on the first read, but after that the vaults were a drag to read through and I never liked the whole personality changes on a couple of years. This fix though so far has been a joy to read and will be on re-reads.