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Very solid first story! Great description and suspense, certainly excited to find out more about the world. Would love to see more though, it is a bit short.

This is great. The beginning, which starts with a very, very vivid dream, pulls the reader straight into the plot. The intrigue is built up. The writing quality is commendable. Barely any mistakes. The character, Ly, is perfectly designed. Overall, Great job!

Thanks! I've never used Webnovel on mobile, so I didn't know that would happen. I'll try it next time.

The story is completely captivating. The mystery involved adds intrigue. The writing quality is very good, and then world background is definitely developed. Kudos!

This is an absolutely fantastic novel. Honestly, this is THE best webnovel that I have read up to now. Everything is built to perfection. Kudos!!!

The writing quality is fantastic. The world building is very novel. The story develops at a slow but captivating pace. The characters are very well distinguished, and their growth can already be shown in the two chapters that I read.

This book was quite a nice read. There are mistakes with capitalization. The main character needs to be more relatable for readers. The plot is developing at a nice pace. Overall, good job!

Shameless review from author! This is my first WPC novel, so I'd appreciate every bit of feedback! Don't forget to vote for me and share! Thanks!!!

The story is wonderful. It is still quite new, with only three chapters. The description is detailed. The plot seems interesting. Good job!!!

The story is definitely interesting. However, there are lots of mistakes with the punctuation, and even basic capitalization. The plot and character design are commendable. Good job!