Daoist2ndArcher

Daoist2ndArcher

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Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
6 months ago
Replied to Mrnoob5089

All the way till the last chapter before I dropped this trash

Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
6 months ago
Replied to TheDudeThatReads

20 people beg to differ just in this review, I'm pretty sure that there are two or three more enlightened reviews so, yeah, we did, you just like trash and that's okay. It's not like you can't read it because it isn't good. I will just put you into the category of MGA fans in my heart, which is synonymous to braindead for me.

Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
7 months ago
Replied to Spartan_001

Bruh, she looks like Rock Lee real life if he as a female

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Priest, Pray For Us

Priest, Pray For Us

Movies · SrCuervo

Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
7 months ago
Replied to ThanatosGreekGod

He literally starts saying that likability is relative, so there's no need to come to my review and say shit, he could just go and do his, because, I didn't like it and that's what my OP is saying. So there's no point in making his comment. Of course, if you had two braincells working, you could have realized that.

Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
7 months ago
Replied to TheGeekWhoLived

Of all the things you could have said about my review, yours is literally the most useless and you literally start by refuting yourself, so what's the point?

Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
7 months ago
Replied to hero4hire

Just re-read your own answer and consider it yourself, does it look like death? Yes? No? If it looks like death, he can escape, if it doesn't, he will just live normally

* The ability to voluntarily 'die' and trigger your next reincarnation. Intended for use in situations such as being trapped in an inescapable void, buried underneath a collapsed mountain, being devoured alive for eternity in an Elder God's stomach, locked in temporal stasis, trapped in an inescapable time loop, etc. This ability will never activate under any circumstances unless you genuinely and of your own free will want it to, but can be activated 'subconsciously' regardless of how incapacitated you are.

The Immortal in Star Wars

The Immortal in Star Wars

Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792

Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
7 months ago
Replied to funmaxwell

I don't have to consider anything cause if you're going with tech as the main ability there's really no need to waste time reading it cause that's the worst possible idea for a SW fanfic. The wish fulfilment factor isn't there. Also it's borderline as unlikable as being a transmigrator and telling people about it in the story.

I suggested the Galaxy far far away ... Star Wars. And it was accepted actually. Sadly, I was told that there was no guarantee that I would be Force-sensitive and also not whether I would be strong in the Force. I was allowed to make one wish though. I was about to wish for powerful Force sensitivity but then stopped. No matter how much I wanted that, there was no guarantee I had that I would even make it long in life and use that talent to become powerful. 

The Immortal in Star Wars

The Immortal in Star Wars

Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792

Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
7 months ago
Posted

The protagonist is unlikable and another one of those kinds of Immortals without ambitions or personality who live a miserable life and where no matter what happens you can tell from the start that the ending will probably be very bad, not to mention the overall development. Also there's way too much being told and nothing happening.

Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
7 months ago
Commented

Disgusting

At first, I didn't want to marry anyone and thought that I was better suited as a lone wolf. But that changed when I met my wife. Names aren't something we had or used but there were some sounds that we used instead. Each member had a specific sound that was their name if you will. When I saw her, I thought that I had never seen anyone as pretty in my two lives. I can still remember it as if it happened today. I loved everything about her. I loved her smell, her gait, how she held herself, how she looked and especially her smile. When she smiled, the sun shone more brightly. 

The Immortal in Star Wars

The Immortal in Star Wars

Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792

Daoist2ndArcher
Daoist2ndArcher
7 months ago
Replied to hero4hire

Have you not understood yet that this immortality is above all concepts? A timeloop is in this case just another form of death, and therefore, he can escape it.

* The ability to voluntarily 'die' and trigger your next reincarnation. Intended for use in situations such as being trapped in an inescapable void, buried underneath a collapsed mountain, being devoured alive for eternity in an Elder God's stomach, locked in temporal stasis, trapped in an inescapable time loop, etc. This ability will never activate under any circumstances unless you genuinely and of your own free will want it to, but can be activated 'subconsciously' regardless of how incapacitated you are.

The Immortal in Star Wars

The Immortal in Star Wars

Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792

  • Dragon Ball Idle System [AU] original

    Dragon Ball Idle System [AU]

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS CULTIVATION ISEKAI DRAGONBALL

    Transmigrated to another world that bore an uncanny resemblance to the show Dragon Ball, a weak and untalented boy awakened the Idle System. Can't improve as fast as the others? Just use more slots to multiply the efficacy. Not enough slots? Defeat a powerful enemy to gain another slot! Being human limits your potential? Well, that might not have a solution... A/N: This is an AU fanfic, there will be many changes to the story, power system and so on.

    1 Chs 15 Collections

  • The Familiar of Zero Alternate original

    The Familiar of Zero Alternate

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE MAGIC HAREM MYSTERY DARK SLICEOFLIFE ISEKAI IMMORTAL EVOLUTION LIGHTNOVEL

    This is a retelling type of fanfiction, it follows the story of Hiraga Saito through a darker and more complex version of the world of 'The Familiar of Zero', the way in which magic works is somewhat changed based on my preferences, and there are many modifications to the story, characters, places, motivations and so on. Synopsis: At the Tristain Magic Academy, her classmates call bumbling witch-in-training Louise Francoise le Blanc de la Valliere “Louise the Zero.” During an important coming-of-age ritual, when each student must summon their own witch’s familiar, Louise confirms her classmates’ opinion by accidentally conjuring up a normal teenage boy from Japan. Whether the two of them like it or not, the laws of magic bind them as master and servant forever! DISCLAIMER: I do not own The Familiar of Zero and do not take claim to any of the original contents used in this fanfiction such as the cover, plotlines, characters, etc. This is a work of a fan for fans who wish to read a slightly darker version of the story.

    4 Chs 96 Collections

  • Reborn In Naruto Without Any Cheats!? original

    Reborn In Naruto Without Any Cheats!?

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG KINGDOMBUILDING NARUTO

    Reincarnated from another world where warriors trained the power of Arcane Energy, he carries the knowledge of Martial Arts and Techniques of great value, but no cheat with him! How could it be? Can he, someone reincarnated as an ordinary individual do things better than those full of talent and the support of their powerful families?

    15 Chs 840 Collections

  • I Can Upgrade My Way to The Top original

    I Can Upgrade My Way to The Top

    Fantasy ROMANCE WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE ISEKAI CAMPUS KINGDOMBUILDING CONQUER VIDEOGAME

    Ichikawa Satoru dies while playing a popular dating sim that takes place in an arcanepunk reality, despite not advancing in any way through the story of the game, he somehow gets the protagonist's special power of being able to upgrade things. Now trapped in the world of Lunaria, he will have to discover a way to survive in this world full of danger while also getting to know a bunch of beautiful girls amidst tons of troublesome situations.

    3 Chs 7 Collections

  • Dragon Ball S original

    Dragon Ball S

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS CULTIVATION ISEKAI ANIME DRAGONBALL

    In a parallel reality, a world full of magic and adventure exists, it's in this world where one can make a wish to the dragon god! To do so, all you have to do is gather the Dragon Balls, but can you do it? Do you have the strength to roam the most dangerous of the lands, the power to defeat the most treacherous of the villains, and the willpower to endure the harshest of the environments? For your dreams, how much would you be willing to sacrifice?

    6 Chs 34 Collections

  • An Individual's Power original

    An Individual's Power

    Sci-fi ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS

    Harrison Lawford was broken inside and outside, having lost his mother and being on the brink of losing everything he has, he felt so hollowed that the world lost its colors to him. Coincidently, on the same day that the bastard of his father died, the new opportunity that he had been looking for appeared in the form of a woman called Sabrina. Follow Harrison in this world where science and magic come together to form a world where both myths and scientific innovations walk together. From aliens to monsters, and everything in between, this story has all.

    2 Chs 1 Collections

  • A Dark Soul From Afar original

    A Dark Soul From Afar

    Video Games ACTION ROMANCE TRANSMIGRATION IMMORTAL EVOLUTION

    Revived in a city in Astora, Alaric is now stuck in the world of Dark Souls, fortunately, the heavens were just and gave him everything that a chosen undead would need, mainly an interface with the power of a game-like system.

    3 Chs 31 Collections