Badly_boy

don't listen to anyone, write your own story. You're doing a great job, which is quite difficult, especially considering the sophistication of this world. I am only reading this because of your vision of the world of Gu. If you know someone who can write about the world of Gu, then let him write, I will only be happy to read, but separately from you. I believe you can complete this one story and give it YOUR epic ending.

it was said that otherworldly demons have inborn marks of dao when they enter the Gu world, which have nothing to do with the Gu world. For example, marks of the dao of the cosmic path of the wopian heavens. Use otherworldly FY marks in this book if it fits into your scenario.

this arc is too long

I just don't understand why they are so attached to Yami. This whole arch with fog looks stupid and unnecessary. It becomes impossible to read

I also thought about the dao of living beings (idk what to call it. Maybe the dao of life?). I think this dao includes 6 (at least) paths. For example, the path of the soul, the path of bones (the skeleton of a being. Maybe this includes joints, tendons, and ligaments, but I'm not very good at biology), the path of blood (blood delivering energy through the body and some other functions), the path of flesh (skin , muscles, organs). The way of food (to eat to grow)? Perhaps the path of wisdom, since all living beings are able to think (at least at the level of instincts). While writing, I thought that the dao of life could be a sublevel of the dao of death, because the dao of life, so to speak, is the beginning of the dao of death (you can’t cut down a tree if it hasn’t grown).

Considering how many parts of immemorial yellow heavens the Treasures of Yellow Heaven swallowed for 300,000 years (and the heaven spirit of this grotto provided a large reward for shards of heaven), it will be very useful, including for a killing move to protect against conclusions that uses signs of the dao of the heavenly path, materials of the heavenly path or the gu of the heavenly path for its existence and strengthening (as far as I remember this move is called the "veil of the heavenly web", with its help FY partially hid his luck from Giant Sun iv and defended himself from attacking moves), I think with such strengthening with signs of dao of the heavenly path, this move will be one of the strongest defensive moves before the dao emperors, it should also be in the initial levels of the dao emperor

FY can annex the Grotto-heaven with part of the Immemorial Heavens, as it contains the marks of the heaven Path Dao. FY received a killing move from the Paradise Earth immortal venerable to raining the marks of the dao of the heavenly path, so capturing a part of the immemorial heavens brings FY many marks of the dao of the heavenly path (this move FY got from lu wei yin after the war of fate). English is not my native language, I hope it's clear