Gumpta

well although I was really liking how your Mc was helping rudy become a better person and I liked the brotherly bond, now the problem remains you have to save who rudy would have saved otherwise .. isent that too cruel? I hate the obligation and the need to follow cannon so close .. you could have just not wrote in any scenes with rudy after the mana disaster and left it at that ... I'm looking forward to what you do, hopefully add the sad and pitiful yet hot kinky gilf elf to Harem lol.

so create a plant growing spell...

so create a spell for each ailment... you can create a circle or spell to do anything.

point is, the benifit of having her on your team greatly overcomes her past , s class adventure wirh hundred years of experience in the field , could learn a lot.

it should be more then power to meet the next rank, because if it's just power then he should already be 2x god level at this point, it should also mean the complexity of the spell, like water balls to water cannon (intermediate) adds penetratiin then water spike ( advanced ) adds rotation on top of the beginning and intermediate additions, saint level water drill adds more density and speed while also adding a lasting effect so it can drill a while without input ect water bfg for king level can idk add more density and speed plus size who knows what else ect... point is power plus complexity is what makes it the next rank not just overcharging , of that's the case a water ball could be god level..

should do this through eyes as well.

that's why its better to awaken at 10 or 12. all the worst is over.

says the guy that wants to kill and mount heads on his car .....

I like this!

enforcing