I'm writing this after finishing chapter 36. The beginning was good, and I really liked the idea, then Felicia, and I've seen this or a similar thread too many times, so I didn't like it very much, boss... you probably already know, and although I wanted to get into this part, it was somehow difficult for me. Then I couldn't get back into the story until the point where he was talking to the guy on the bridge before the jump, then I just kept going through the chapters without paying much attention to them, just thinking "again? ". Overall, I lost interest in this story
the comedy almost completely killed my interest in this story
I've enjoyed every chapter so far, and I can't wait for the next one
Ok, I really like the beginning and the way you wrote the whole battle, but when it ended I was just disappointed and just skimmed through the rest of the chapters. For me it was unnecessary and completely killed the pleasure of reading. I thought the MC just came in and out of the world, which probably made me dislike this arc. The way he was treated and these interactions with others irritated me a bit and showed me what the rest of the story would look like, which confirmed my belief that it wasn't for me. Anyway, I definitely wrote too much and I have go to sleep because in 7 hours I have to wake up for work. good luck with the story
A few thoughts, it was really nice to read until the battle with Zeus, which seemed forced to me, and after that I had a problem getting interested in the story again for a few chapters, but I have a rather positive opinion about the whole thing
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