Asphorus

Asphorus

male LV 3

Harem fanfictions with OP MCs are the best.

2021-09-01 Joint Philippines
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Asphorus
Asphorus
1 years ago
Replied to Over_The_Moon69

No, there was no character development whatsoever. Adam was still getting tricked by Ruby as shown in the previous chaps. Aqua was happy because the MC cooked him food. Maybe the only thing that could've been development here was Ruby and Aqua figuring out what happened with Miyako and Adam, but overall, it was nothing but filler. You even based the title on something so small of an act. It just goes to show that this chapter was pretty much insignificant.I'm not bashing the fic, author. I like it. But you gotta step up your game. I know this is supposed to be a SoL story too and the MC's gonna have his moments where he's just chill. But you gotta make it more interesting and not just—like the other guy said—developing pancakes.

Asphorus
Asphorus
1 years ago
Commented

U gotta do better than that, author. U can't just milk readers of their power stones then drop chapters with no plot progression...

Asphorus
Asphorus
2 years ago
Replied to Adisial

Bruh, omg you're really d*mn st*pid are you? It's the d*mn shadow ban by Webtoon. If even look at you're other replies, it shows it was deleted as well. Use you're brain, gosh kid. Stop being st*pid.

Despite my immeasurable INT, I couldn't control my biological reactions, so I was also blushing like Kaori despite my calm expression.

My Isekai: I Had a Fun Life in a Fictional World with my Cheat Ability

My Isekai: I Had a Fun Life in a Fictional World with my Cheat Ability

Others · Eromaru

Asphorus
Asphorus
2 years ago
Commented

Uhh... did he use his head to run?

2.... 1.... go" before I said go tho, she already was running. I made it seemed like I was struggling and eventually lost. I collapsed on the floor and said "Eri, I need a head rub" (AN: Cringe) She did her little wattle run and came up to me. She rubbed my head and was saying " There there" People around seeing this couldnt help but think 'Cute'

OP SKILL SYSTEM IN MHA

OP SKILL SYSTEM IN MHA

Fantasy · qu3n_

Asphorus
Asphorus
2 years ago
Commented

I think you've made a typo, it should be Souna, right? Or did he slip up, accidentally addressing her by her real name?

Asphorus
Asphorus
2 years ago
Commented

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"I've got a boyfriend but he has the smallest dick in the school. The most I did was to show him my tits." Seeing my strange expression, she continued, "Don't worry, this isn't cheating. In the first place, the only reason I chose him as my boyfriend so that I can cuck him with the biggest cock I could find."

The Gamer System

The Gamer System

Anime & Comics · IamSuperflous

Asphorus
Asphorus
2 years ago
Replied to IamSuperflous

Oh, okay. Thanks for telling me.

I assigned 10 points to END and INT without further ado, and the remaining 5 went to WIS. As a result, my HP/MP quickly rose to 1500 and my SP to 3000! Honestly, those multipliers are utterly broken, and I love it.

The Gamer System

The Gamer System

Anime & Comics · IamSuperflous

Asphorus
Asphorus
2 years ago
Commented

What's the meaning of SP? And what does it do?

I assigned 10 points to END and INT without further ado, and the remaining 5 went to WIS. As a result, my HP/MP quickly rose to 1500 and my SP to 3000! Honestly, those multipliers are utterly broken, and I love it.

The Gamer System

The Gamer System

Anime & Comics · IamSuperflous

Asphorus
Asphorus
2 years ago
Replied to Adisial

I admit, he isn't confident that he could pick up girls because he created those skills. Did he use his advantages, though? Yes, because he created those skills to help him pick the girls up. Is he following his plans? Yes, in the first place, his plans were only to pick up girls and live his life enjoyably. Dude, you're the one who should stop spouting nonsense, we all know I won this debate, you can't even refute when I said you're a st*pid, petty person. A person who only knows how to complain. Like I said before, no one forced you to read, you're not even paying the author. This is the author's first fanfiction, if he makes mistakes, you can just give a good criticism.

Despite my immeasurable INT, I couldn't control my biological reactions, so I was also blushing like Kaori despite my calm expression.

My Isekai: I Had a Fun Life in a Fictional World with my Cheat Ability

My Isekai: I Had a Fun Life in a Fictional World with my Cheat Ability

Others · Eromaru

Asphorus
Asphorus
2 years ago
Commented

I'll settle with this one then.

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On the flip side, I'd have to admit that I was quite handsome. Scratch that, I am very handsome. Just above 6 feet in height with purple-ish short hair and crystal-clear dark-blue eyes. Not to mention the pale skin and lean build stretched all across with no fat in sight whatsoever… other than in crotch… ten inches of solid wood. I nodded to myself. Obviously satisfied.

The Gamer System

The Gamer System

Anime & Comics · IamSuperflous