chouchou_jimi

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chouchou_jimi
chouchou_jimi
3 months ago
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B/ In cooperating with Jūgo Clan who has the natural energy affinity and the fūinjutsu of uzumaki which had a lot of potential in origin not to mention the mc's epiphany adding the fūinjutsu to the formulla they even can solve the jūgo clan's problem with that . more important , with that the original plot won't ruined and you will have more space to involve in the plot or be creative and make your own events

chouchou_jimi
chouchou_jimi
6 months ago
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Thnx for the chapter BUT please more updates can you !!!!!!

chouchou_jimi
chouchou_jimi
8 months ago
Commented

No harem pls + ther is no need to chose his girl from the usuel like natasha and emma and storm ... - First the story will collaps and you need more thinking to fixe it - second it will be very prodictable and very repetitive - third and more important it's boooring. Sooo Just add a girl of your own creation to the story and give her the power you like and the power it suits the plot . You can also think about the power that is passed down to his children with the kriptonian blood . Finally this is just an advises but i really hope you take it into consideration 😉

chouchou_jimi
chouchou_jimi
11 months ago
Commented

But hey didn't she wantto die . i don't think somme one wishing death want a relationshep!!

chouchou_jimi
chouchou_jimi
11 months ago
Commented

Keep up

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chouchou_jimi
chouchou_jimi
1 years ago
Commented

What a fool !! do u realy think that the human r evolve from a monky 😂😂