You're doing great, Author! As someone already mentioned, you can't please everyone. Also, you'll keep getting better as you write, so unless you want to keep making revisions, it might be better to tell a good story. Your next one will be better anyway.
Ok, guys, I hope you are enjoying the story so far. I wanted to ask for your opinion since I have been receiving some negative comments. Should I rewrite the starting chapters? If yes, what should I add or remove to make the story better?
Marvel: Gojo Satoru Template
Anime & Comics · SUS_CAT
CHUTES and ladders??? I grew up with SNAKES and ladders, but honestly, chutes make so much more sense in the context of the game.
Dylan went over to find Mark doing his homework. He suggested playing some games while eating snacks instead. Mark was a little hesitant but he had known Dylan for years so he didn't think much about it. They played chutes and ladders and had potato chips with Coke.
Dreams of Stardom (Hollywood SI)
Movies · FableWeaver
*story Damn... Started my review with a typo 😅
The stey is well written and has me hooked. Chapters are longer than many I've seen and don't blindly conform to Canon, like many fics do. The plot is moving along at a steady pace, and I hope the author keeps up the great work. Give it a read.
Great story and is well written. The MC is actually a good hero (like Superman), and unlike what many would think about someone with his powers, he still has his own struggles. Do give it a read and kudos to you, Author!
Unless all this arguing is a setup, there are actually people who eat before brushing? I mean no offense, it's just that on my part of the world that seems so... weird.
"Go brush your teeth and then have breakfast," Ren patted her little head, watching her move away. Then when he heard sizzling sounds from the kitchen, he rushed over, saying, "Uh-oh!"
Dad's Comic Life
Anime & Comics · michaeI
Spider-Man: Fake Red by Yusuke Osawa I think it was cancelled, but it captures the essence of Spider-Man. Do give it a try.
"I know I like Spider-Man but can the writers let Peter have a good moment in his life instead of sending trouble after trouble at him?" the young man said, shaking his head.
A Rider Kick in Marvel
Movies · Najicablitz626
The author is just kidding or is a psychopath if this is what he writes for self-indulgence. I read that false advertising comment and jumped in, expecting a funny, OP MC story and got jumped with the feels. Anyways, the author writes well, and it's shaping up to be a good story, so I hope you all give it a try.
Yeah. Have doctors in the family, and they keep grumbling how people take 0 precautions now just cause its less severe.
Currently sick. Hoping its not covid. Will be back to continuing this once i am better.
Reincarnated as Venom in the DC universe
Movies · Kenji_Makoto
Homelander's recent actions and the growing tension within Vought are troubling. I'm prepared to face whatever comes next, but I can't help but wonder: Will my preparations be enough? The answer is unclear, but one thing is certain—I'm no longer just a puppet in Vought's game. I'm carving out my own path, one way or another.
The Boys: The Speed Of Redemption
TV · Vekay_Legend