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1 days ago
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His mind is already broken , we can understand that by his last words he said

I should have noticed the little details, the switches in the way he speaks, the way he moves, but I was blinded by his friendship, how dumb of me. But then again he was my friend since the day I arrived on sign-up day, help me through a lot so I don't regret being his friend. 

Monster Monarch Evolution

Monster Monarch Evolution

Fantasy · Dreadfull_Dusk

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Primas
1 days ago
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he is an idiot at time like this video nothing here f****** lust took over him

He couldn't help but admire her. As his gaze lingered on her for just a second longer than it should, her eyes flicked over to him. For a split second, their gazes locked.

SSS Ranked Awakening: Rise Of The Beast Overlord

SSS Ranked Awakening: Rise Of The Beast Overlord

Fantasy · Izana07

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4 days ago
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quick death not breath

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10 days ago
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this one is really good I think there is only one problem that you should add different prospectives in this storiy then your story will become more interesting by showing the interaction between two characters

Anyway, I want to ask if you prefer my writing style, a bit thick paragrap, or like a light novel style writing, my previous writing style? I wanna know your thoughts!

Gacha Player: My Luck is Multiplied 10x

Gacha Player: My Luck is Multiplied 10x

Fantasy · CloverNine

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10 days ago
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I am a new reader of your story I don't know about your other school because I have not read them your tab will try but this one is really problems you yourself has found the main problems so I don't have to do anything for you or tell anything's to you what you are still is really has a lots of potential so keep up the work and please prepare for your exam in a good manner like to address email thing in perfect way so you would won't have any type regret for stress because your time is not perfect for your work time hi nahin we should focus on your exam first then do anything else with that you will be able to focus on things that you want to do in a later days when you will be free

Thank you so much for being a part of this journey with me. I can't wait to come back stronger, with better chapters and a fresh energy to bring the story to life. Until then, take care, and I'll see you on December 29!😁

Rebirth in the Novel as an extra

Rebirth in the Novel as an extra

Fantasy · supremeofmonarch

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11 days ago
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this is really Angel

When the light balls broke, two little angels appeared in front of Haru.

Angel Lord In An Isekai (WN)

Angel Lord In An Isekai (WN)

Anime & Comics · LordArchduke

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11 days ago
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you are making him look like an idiot every single thing is repeated I mean at least you should use some kind of f****** brain not like you he is just wearing progress single trap every single time

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11 days ago
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they not the

Shit, Peter thought. He hadn't held back, and while the deserved it, he didn't need to hit any of them so hard. Flash was still lying on the ground in agony, and neither of the other two was moving.

Spiderman: Venom

Spiderman: Venom

Anime & Comics · StoryWanderer

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13 days ago
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and the real story has only 52 chapters, this f***** retching the story so you can enjoy and give him lots and lots of money on his patreon account

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13 days ago
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like always they are making the story beggar and posting it everyday but the real story is much bigger than this one I mean it takes 2 to 3 chapters to even complete the one page of the real story sometime in the bigger that's the normal thing , if you would have just mention his name that you are taking the story and reuploading it here, whatever your reason maybe but you should give some kind of credit and at least you should name or link his name in your tourism where so we can know that you are not a really but you did not even mention that it means you are making a money from somebody else is work you f***** and you does not even have his permission report it if you can