Bast_Zahir

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I just want to complete the profile

2021-07-13 Joint United States
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Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
1 months ago
Posted

I have to say i never expected to read something that requires you to not even have the ability for critical thought, this is very disappointing for the author i advice you to either edit the whole story or start from scratch or your name and reputation will be ruined. Now here is why, first of all the development of the plot is non existent everything has not been thought of more than a second, it is just collection of reused tropes to just make you fell either rage or jealousy, everything from the whole story about getting framed for the first incident to their his family to his friendship with the main lead, everything is written in a way that shows that the author doesnt think their readers have the simple posibility of thinking.

Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
8 months ago
Replied to Omes_7736

Hahahaha i know the feeling

Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
1 years ago
Posted

A good one punch man story, my only problem with it is that the story may get too focused on the multiverse aspect instead of the story within one punch man world.

Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
1 years ago
Commented

Keep going man, but start uploading again from the start

Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
1 years ago
Posted

A great football lightnovel, i hope you keep on updating and I appreciate how quick the updates are man.

Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
1 years ago
Posted

Great novel but too slow unfortunately, if there were many chapters available right now then it would havbe been ok, but with only 40 chapters we cant enjoy the full journey yet.

Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
1 years ago
Posted

A great story keep it up, my ony complaint is that it doesnt have more than 100 fhapters.

Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
1 years ago
Commented

I gotta say, this is the best sentence i have read in a long time.

This the difference between those who have watched "Yuri Boyka" and those who didn't.

Dragonborn Saga

Dragonborn Saga

Video Games · El_Don

Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
2 years ago
Commented

My god this realy resonated with me, hope you also get the happiness you gave to your readers.

Bast_Zahir
Bast_Zahir
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the new chapters author, but i have to say this chapter came out of nowhere i wasnt expwcting a scene like this from the series(i thought it would have been a better choice if a s*x scene was done at the first night of their marriage not now). But still thw story is very very intriguing to the extent you camt wait to see the next chapter.