i really really like this book but please be focused when you are writing. when reading i have discovered make many errors when writing. yuo say she went it's he,he went it's she or brother went it's sister it sometimes confused and slow down the reading and this make the reading to not be smooth again. i am not really from an English zoon and it's only my third language but i can easily read and understand to be able to detect errors but i will not say the same about writing so excuse me for my own errors if there's any .
"Would Jill lend me money? I wanted less and less to be indebted to Kareen, or that mother would ask me to marry her. she's nice, but to me, she's just a little brother," murmured Dean as he stared at the ceiling of his room.
Urban · Nonik_Farellidzy
really love this chapter ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
ch 51 Making out with My Lovely bodyguard
Second Marriage: My Strongest Bodyguard
Urban · Nonik_Farellidzy